Broken promises

[eastrenrose]

What are these promises mean to you ?
Are they vows or chains?
Too much promises , you keep no one
As the time go , the fall comes
lose all the leaves ,one after one

what a burden you were carrying ?
And what a fantasy?, i was living
I should believe that no love last
i should believe my heart lost

look at the mirror,what can you see?
a man without features means none
ears are deaf from all these fake
the mask is off , i see the bald face


Two hearts in one ,gathering in one promise
to live togather ,even after death ,
you ll be a life in every memory
i ll be there in your heart in every beat


written by eastrenrose

I hope you like it . iam waiting your comments

[دانية]

it's wounderful words

thanks alot

[M.o_o.N]

Hello Miss poet :)

Very nice , I like the rhym /n/ , you'v done a wonderful job

The poem carries lots of doubts though!

Keep writing huny , thank you for sharing it with us.

^.^

[sakina27]

it so nice

[BloumagrieT]

eastrenrose

As a biginning it's good so you should keep reading more and more

Concerning the content conveyed I just want to say something

that life doesn't stop cause someone keeps breaking promises

We have to trust those who deserve only

Thank you for sharing

[eastrenrose]

Thanks for all who read my poem and give me helpful advices
And i promise you to take it

[المراد]

hii its nice keep on going

[eastrenrose]

Thanks for your comments

[جوهر]

it is a good poem i like it toooooooooo much
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thanks