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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : A BEAUTIFUL DREAM - A New Short Story By Sirhasan



ACME
17-03-2010, 05:03 PM
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A BEAUTIFUL DREAM

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As the clock struck eleven at night , I went to my bed wearily . Not after long that I fell fast asleep .Soon an image of a vast green landscape began to appear before me. I found myself standing in a huge open meadow .Everything was perfect , the air , the setting and the whole place . I felt my chest filled with cold air , which I could not explain why . I have never seen such a place before in my life. High mountains , waterfalls and trees everywhere . It was fascinating and picturesque . It was an endearing place indeed . Everything was so perfect and captivating .
I just lied down ,closed my eyes and began to think deeply . As I opened my eyes again , I was so surprised at that . She was there . My love was there . She came to visit me once and for all . She just came into sight , I know not from where .
When I looked into her eyes I saw all my life there . Really my words stopped and I could say nothing . She urged me not to say anything and put her hand on my mouth . I wished that the whole life would stop there and then and we could live that moment ever and ever . Then she held her hands and said come on my ………. As I raised from ground I can see the birds singing and the trees dancing happily for our meeting .
Just then my vision became blurred and I woke . I felt a tap on my shoulder. When I opened my eyes I saw my brother saying : Wake up it is almost 7o'clock . we are late
for school . Oh , no , I said why did you wake me up You little idiot . I nearly cried .


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My Regards To All
Sirhasan

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سعودي انجلش
17-03-2010, 05:11 PM
thanks
well done my brother
keep on

I care
17-03-2010, 05:32 PM
what a pity ,sir!!

rose rani
17-03-2010, 06:49 PM
so nice this is actually the end
of any beautiful dream
and your writing is so amazing
thank you my brother for sharing us

eastrenrose
17-03-2010, 08:49 PM
Very romantic dream .you really make imagine that place too
Well down
Keep writing

Petunia
18-03-2010, 01:41 AM
when I opened my eyes I saw my brother saying : Wake up it is almost 7o'clock . we are late



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:smile (98):LOOOOOOL what a pity


well i think it was better for you to get up
cause that DREAM land :small (371):wHich you
describe will never ever find these days
with some people :smile (92):not all them for sure ,


so welcome back to the reality LOL



Brother hasan it's very wonderful story


thanks

Nanosh
18-03-2010, 05:00 AM
Really


i like the way of ur writing and even the idea of the topic

you have the ability to take reader's attention and then u surprise him by wonderful ending

thank u

keep on

excuse me Sir

can i ask you about

What are the real encouragements that help u to write such story

ACME
18-03-2010, 01:31 PM
Really


i like the way of ur writing and even the idea of the topic

you have the ability to take reader's attention and then u surprise him by wonderful ending

thank u

keep on

excuse me Sir

can i ask you about

What are the real encouragements that help u to write such story




Thanks a lot Nanosh for your nice comment and beautiful words
To answer the question I can say it is a mixture of real life
experience plus imaginative writing help
Thanks so much
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Nanosh
19-03-2010, 03:36 AM
Thank you
Sir

مـلاك
19-03-2010, 02:13 PM
wooow

so wonderful and awesome story

and you past master in writing

Mash Allah Tbark Allah


go a head my brother

ACME
19-03-2010, 09:20 PM
wooow

so wonderful and awesome story

and you past master in writing

Mash Allah Tbark Allah


go a head my brother




Thank You Malak For Your Reply

I Am Happy That You Liked It

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N teacher
19-03-2010, 10:20 PM
lol

what a pity

very nice story

many thanks dear bro

ACME
20-03-2010, 12:38 AM
lol

what a pity

very nice story

many thanks dear bro



Dear N teacher

Many thanks to U , I am happy U liked it

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M.o_o.N
20-03-2010, 12:47 AM
you were describing the way my grandfather use , you both makes me eager to know what the end will be . I loved it.

That place was just like heaven , I wanna kick your brother for waking you up lol

Super wow and wow , I loooooved this one though it ended so quick ^.^


Thank you dear brother, Big THANK YOU.

ACME
20-03-2010, 12:59 AM
you were describing the way my grandfather use , you both makes me eager to know what the end will be . I loved it.

That place was just like heaven , I wanna kick your brother for waking you up lol

Super wow and wow , I loooooved this one though it ended so quick ^.^


Thank you dear brother, Big THANK YOU.




hahahahahhahahahahahha , You really made me laugh
Me too want to kick that little naughty bro
I am sooooo happy U liked it
This is a privilege
Big Thanks
To U Too
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:lost lady:
20-03-2010, 01:23 AM
what a poor little brother..NOT idiot
his misfortune that you're his brother^_^
you have to wake up earlier than him to take him to school ^^
Mr.dreamy welcome back to the real world
nice story indeed
many thanks

ACME
20-03-2010, 02:21 AM
what a poor little brother..NOT idiot
his misfortune that you're his brother^_^
you have to wake up earlier than him to take him to school ^^
Mr.dreamy welcome back to the real world
nice story indeed
many thanks



Wallah I laughed from my heart , Thanks a lot for your
interesting comment . I can not stop laughing ^^
Thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanks Indeeeeeeeeeeeeed
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ACME
22-03-2010, 09:26 PM
I hope others will like that dream , too >>>>lol

ACME
25-03-2010, 08:56 PM
By the way , a dream can be interpreted in different ways

See you in my next dream , Ahhhhhh I must sleep now

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BloumagrieT
26-03-2010, 02:10 AM
There's always a sudden and unexpected short cut for dreams like that

What to say?! Reality rules

Thanks for the dreamy dream

I like lanscapes

ACME
28-03-2010, 02:17 PM
There's always a sudden and unexpected short cut for dreams like that

What to say?! Reality rules

Thanks for the dreamy dream

I like lanscapes




Thanks for your passing
I am happy you liked the
description
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ACME
05-04-2010, 08:57 PM
I hope others will like it , too

علاء
28-04-2010, 02:43 PM
thanks alot for this nice story

ACME
28-04-2010, 03:06 PM
thanks alot for this nice story


Your passing is appreciated . Thanks a lot

ACME
25-05-2010, 12:52 AM
thanks
well done my brother
keep on


Thanks for being here. It is appreciated

ACME
25-05-2010, 12:53 AM
what a pity ,sir!!


looooooooooool

ACME
25-05-2010, 12:55 AM
so nice this is actually the end
of any beautiful dream
and your writing is so amazing
thank you my brother for sharing us


I am happy you liked it .It is my pleasure

ACME
25-05-2010, 12:58 AM
Very romantic dream .you really make imagine that place too
Well down
Keep writing


Thanks for coming by

● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆
25-05-2010, 03:15 PM
they have said every thing about your dream
all i will wish for you my brother
avery beautiful life more than your un finshed dream

DIMPLES
25-05-2010, 11:26 PM
very interesting dream


thank you

ACME
25-05-2010, 11:51 PM
they have said every thing about your dream
all i will wish for you my brother
avery beautiful life more than your un finshed dream


Thanks a lot for you nice words . I appreciate your wish

ACME
25-05-2010, 11:52 PM
very interesting dream


thank you


You are welcome