مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : A BEAUTIFUL DREAM - A New Short Story By Sirhasan
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A BEAUTIFUL DREAM
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As the clock struck eleven at night , I went to my bed wearily . Not after long that I fell fast asleep .Soon an image of a vast green landscape began to appear before me. I found myself standing in a huge open meadow .Everything was perfect , the air , the setting and the whole place . I felt my chest filled with cold air , which I could not explain why . I have never seen such a place before in my life. High mountains , waterfalls and trees everywhere . It was fascinating and picturesque . It was an endearing place indeed . Everything was so perfect and captivating .
I just lied down ,closed my eyes and began to think deeply . As I opened my eyes again , I was so surprised at that . She was there . My love was there . She came to visit me once and for all . She just came into sight , I know not from where .
When I looked into her eyes I saw all my life there . Really my words stopped and I could say nothing . She urged me not to say anything and put her hand on my mouth . I wished that the whole life would stop there and then and we could live that moment ever and ever . Then she held her hands and said come on my ………. As I raised from ground I can see the birds singing and the trees dancing happily for our meeting .
Just then my vision became blurred and I woke . I felt a tap on my shoulder. When I opened my eyes I saw my brother saying : Wake up it is almost 7o'clock . we are late
for school . Oh , no , I said why did you wake me up You little idiot . I nearly cried .
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My Regards To All
Sirhasan
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سعودي انجلش
17-03-2010, 05:11 PM
thanks
well done my brother
keep on
I care
17-03-2010, 05:32 PM
what a pity ,sir!!
rose rani
17-03-2010, 06:49 PM
so nice this is actually the end
of any beautiful dream
and your writing is so amazing
thank you my brother for sharing us
eastrenrose
17-03-2010, 08:49 PM
Very romantic dream .you really make imagine that place too
Well down
Keep writing
Petunia
18-03-2010, 01:41 AM
when I opened my eyes I saw my brother saying : Wake up it is almost 7o'clock . we are late
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:smile (98):LOOOOOOL what a pity
well i think it was better for you to get up
cause that DREAM land :small (371):wHich you
describe will never ever find these days
with some people :smile (92):not all them for sure ,
so welcome back to the reality LOL
Brother hasan it's very wonderful story
thanks
Nanosh
18-03-2010, 05:00 AM
Really
i like the way of ur writing and even the idea of the topic
you have the ability to take reader's attention and then u surprise him by wonderful ending
thank u
keep on
excuse me Sir
can i ask you about
What are the real encouragements that help u to write such story
Really
i like the way of ur writing and even the idea of the topic
you have the ability to take reader's attention and then u surprise him by wonderful ending
thank u
keep on
excuse me Sir
can i ask you about
What are the real encouragements that help u to write such story
Thanks a lot Nanosh for your nice comment and beautiful words
To answer the question I can say it is a mixture of real life
experience plus imaginative writing help
Thanks so much
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Nanosh
19-03-2010, 03:36 AM
Thank you
Sir
مـلاك
19-03-2010, 02:13 PM
wooow
so wonderful and awesome story
and you past master in writing
Mash Allah Tbark Allah
go a head my brother
wooow
so wonderful and awesome story
and you past master in writing
Mash Allah Tbark Allah
go a head my brother
Thank You Malak For Your Reply
I Am Happy That You Liked It
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N teacher
19-03-2010, 10:20 PM
lol
what a pity
very nice story
many thanks dear bro
lol
what a pity
very nice story
many thanks dear bro
Dear N teacher
Many thanks to U , I am happy U liked it
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M.o_o.N
20-03-2010, 12:47 AM
you were describing the way my grandfather use , you both makes me eager to know what the end will be . I loved it.
That place was just like heaven , I wanna kick your brother for waking you up lol
Super wow and wow , I loooooved this one though it ended so quick ^.^
Thank you dear brother, Big THANK YOU.
you were describing the way my grandfather use , you both makes me eager to know what the end will be . I loved it.
That place was just like heaven , I wanna kick your brother for waking you up lol
Super wow and wow , I loooooved this one though it ended so quick ^.^
Thank you dear brother, Big THANK YOU.
hahahahahhahahahahahha , You really made me laugh
Me too want to kick that little naughty bro
I am sooooo happy U liked it
This is a privilege
Big Thanks
To U Too
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:lost lady:
20-03-2010, 01:23 AM
what a poor little brother..NOT idiot
his misfortune that you're his brother^_^
you have to wake up earlier than him to take him to school ^^
Mr.dreamy welcome back to the real world
nice story indeed
many thanks
what a poor little brother..NOT idiot
his misfortune that you're his brother^_^
you have to wake up earlier than him to take him to school ^^
Mr.dreamy welcome back to the real world
nice story indeed
many thanks
Wallah I laughed from my heart , Thanks a lot for your
interesting comment . I can not stop laughing ^^
Thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanks Indeeeeeeeeeeeeed
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I hope others will like that dream , too >>>>lol
By the way , a dream can be interpreted in different ways
See you in my next dream , Ahhhhhh I must sleep now
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BloumagrieT
26-03-2010, 02:10 AM
There's always a sudden and unexpected short cut for dreams like that
What to say?! Reality rules
Thanks for the dreamy dream
I like lanscapes
There's always a sudden and unexpected short cut for dreams like that
What to say?! Reality rules
Thanks for the dreamy dream
I like lanscapes
Thanks for your passing
I am happy you liked the
description
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I hope others will like it , too
thanks alot for this nice story
thanks alot for this nice story
Your passing is appreciated . Thanks a lot
thanks
well done my brother
keep on
Thanks for being here. It is appreciated
what a pity ,sir!!
looooooooooool
so nice this is actually the end
of any beautiful dream
and your writing is so amazing
thank you my brother for sharing us
I am happy you liked it .It is my pleasure
Very romantic dream .you really make imagine that place too
Well down
Keep writing
Thanks for coming by
● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆
25-05-2010, 03:15 PM
they have said every thing about your dream
all i will wish for you my brother
avery beautiful life more than your un finshed dream
DIMPLES
25-05-2010, 11:26 PM
very interesting dream
thank you
they have said every thing about your dream
all i will wish for you my brother
avery beautiful life more than your un finshed dream
Thanks a lot for you nice words . I appreciate your wish
very interesting dream
thank you
You are welcome
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