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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : The last wish



eastrenrose
24-03-2010, 04:19 PM
The last wish

The last wish I have made
I wish my heart rest in peace
In your heart grave yard
I had buried as last love
A heart bleeding too much love
You cannot stop it, how ever you try
A gift from me shall not return
My heart rest beneth your vain
Pumps the life to mine
I see many roses, cover me
As a sheet, as lover tears
Wash me sadness, kill my pain
I hide them inside my eyes.
.my cure, shall not be known
One day. I will be wakeup again
No other place. I wish to live again
I rather prefer if I still dead



written by eastrenroseI hope you like it .

ACME
24-03-2010, 04:24 PM
Both emotional and touching , it carries a personal agony ,too

Thanks and carry on . I wish you a bright future

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BloumagrieT
25-03-2010, 02:36 PM
Those lines show how capable you are

I loved it brother so keep writing and we'll keep enjoying

Bless you

eastrenrose

N teacher
26-03-2010, 12:50 AM
i like these nice lines

keep on

Allah bless u