مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : one mistake
eastrenrose
02-04-2010, 10:56 PM
[[[
COLOR="DarkRed"]CENTER][CENTER]SIZE="4"]Is it love a mistake?
If it is, What s the correct?
To live without love
As stone?
One mistake.i did
Changed my view to world
Gave me wings to fly
High, high into the moon
This mistake , teach me,
How to live, how to smile
Full me heart by happiness.
With spring roses and songs
Cure all wounds , with one touch
Change my tears to unique diamonds
One mistake I did,
A promise to keep my heart is beating
My soul to rest between love palms
One mistake, iam not regret
To keep doing for ever and so on
Live to love or love to live
A question which one comes first?[/COLOR[/COLOR]]]
:small:[COLOR="Purple"]"]written by Eastrenrose[/B][/COLOR[/SIZE]]
Petunia
02-04-2010, 11:29 PM
thank you very great lines
full of honest feelings
love never ever would be a mistake
appreciate your writing^^
Dear Sis
May Allah protect you
a very very very wonderful lines
:smile (40):
its contain a sweet meanings
but if you ask me
I'll say
that we have nothing to do
sometimes
love attack our hearts
so
what ever we do we can not avoid the truth of love
:smile (92):
May Allah protect my weak heart
Many Thanks To You
eastrenrose
04-04-2010, 08:40 PM
thanks for reading and for these sweet comments
:lost lady:
05-04-2010, 02:48 PM
One mistake,,I'll never regret it
To keep doing for ever and so on
Love to live or live to love
Nice lines honey
Keep it up
waiting for more
eastrenrose
05-04-2010, 08:48 PM
Thanks dear lost for reading it and for your nice words
**PRINCESS**
05-04-2010, 09:58 PM
nice lines
keep up the good work
waiting for more
eastrenrose
08-04-2010, 10:24 PM
thanks for reading and your nice comment
Try To Reach
08-04-2010, 11:39 PM
b e a u t i f u l
thanx for these high class lines
full of meanings and full of love
thanks so much for the topic
BloumagrieT
11-04-2010, 10:08 PM
eastrenrose
Pretty good
except for some grammatical mistakes
I loved the feelings expressed within the lines
Thanks brother
dannon
12-04-2010, 01:34 PM
Tank you my dear sister
the lines are so beautiful and sensative
I have may short words and essays and i want a literture specialist in English to correct it for me is there anybody here?
eastrenrose
12-04-2010, 09:09 PM
eastrenrose
Pretty good
except for some grammatical mistakes
I loved the feelings expressed within the lines
Thanks brother
Thanks dear Bloumagrie
I appreciate you advice alot. Anshala i will take it
:smile (74):by the way Iam sister
eastrenrose
12-04-2010, 09:17 PM
Tank you my dear sister
the lines are so beautiful and sensative
I have may short words and essays and i want a literture specialist in English to correct it for me is there anybody here?
Thanks for reading it,
i hope if i can help you ,but you can puplish your work in English club as i do , and members here they will help you
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