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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : A New Thought



JuSt Me
01-01-2006, 12:58 AM
I can't stand the silence,
I can't stand the tears,
I can't stand my life,
I can't stand these years.

You're my entire world,
I gave you my heart,
Hope you do the same,
Cause obsession is just my act.

My love couldn't be reached,
Couldn't be touched by any other,
You're all what I need,
No one instead no other.

You make me whole,
You fill my void,
You vivify my soul.

Why life is moving you!
To a distant place,
I'm torning apart,
Couldn't see your beautiful face.

I swore I'd make it work,
Vowed to stay together,
Didn't care about the distance,
Still together forever.

Everyday I make a wish to die...
I try to fight off all the pain,
I shoot through every vein.

Months go and go,
And I only grow worse,
I can't accept what's happening,
This's love's curse.

I can't over take this,
I can't stand it anymore,
I put your picture everywhere,
I can't pass this door.

I walked into the woods,
Found a secluded place,
Kept thinking of the past.

Hours later he was found,
His body thrown on the ground,
And beside him they found,
Her picture in his hand.

On the back read his reason,
Why she took his life!
What she did to him!
It seemed he had loved her as it like.

Physically autopsy she didn't kill him,
Longing torn his soul apart,
It was obvious how it did,
It was caused of a suffering heart.

SuPeRLaRk
01-01-2006, 01:35 AM
thanks my dear.
for this emotional poem
I swore I'd make it work,
Vowed to stay together,
Didn't care about the distance,
Still together forever.

Instigator
01-01-2006, 02:40 PM
.It is a lovely feeling you have
.It really touches my heart

,Dear brother JuSt Me
.Keep it up
.I hope to see more from you

اسيــ حبه ــرة
02-01-2006, 09:43 PM
Hi brother Just Me

This poem was so professional

Thanks aloooooooooot for sharing such

meaningful words with us

Keep on plz

JuSt Me
03-01-2006, 02:55 AM
Thanks a lot pals, appreciate your pass...

tootalshaam
04-01-2006, 11:22 AM
MANY many many of thnxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
it's soooooo great i like it much much
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I can't stand the silence,
I can't stand the tears,
I can't stand my life,
I can't stand these years

الغاليه
04-01-2006, 02:02 PM
FIRST...AM SOOOOOO SORRY 4 BEING LATE 2 REPLY


SUPER....AMAZING.....STUNNING

LIKE USUAL....UR POEMS CAPTURE MY HEART


KEEP UP DEAR BROTHER

JuSt Me
04-01-2006, 03:04 PM
Dear tootalshaam and Al-ghaliah, I am so glad to see your posts here:D as well as you like my modest thought:o ...

DR AHLAIN
04-01-2006, 09:23 PM
Wonderful poery

Thank you for your choice

زهرة وفى
16-01-2006, 02:59 AM
it's abeatiful poem

May Allah bless you

Just me

keep on