مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : look at the sky
Petunia
03-05-2010, 03:20 AM
LOOK AT THE SKY
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Look up there, what do you see
In the sky, how could it be?
Stars and moon are sparkling
Sun with them is shining
My dream was in a similar side
which lived happily in my mind
Thoughts were it'd come true
And success would come through
It was sparkling just like that moon
Immediately died and all left it alone
It was like stars in that high
Struggled with pain and then died
When I meet people I feel shy
How could they believe my lie?
About that dream that I have told
Froze and died because of clod
Whatever you did your best
Never be afraid to take a test
by : pink-pen
M.o_o.N
03-05-2010, 03:31 AM
What a cute poem my dear Pinky :D
Its simple and nice but to be honest I didnt like the last two lines .
I admire your creative poem ,keep it up huny
These line are beautiful and touching . They are the outcome of strong imaginative mind
The more you write , the more perfect you will be . So keep on and make the sky's the limit
Petunia
03-05-2010, 02:03 PM
What a cute poem my dear Pinky :D
Its simple and nice but to be honest I didnt like the last two lines .
I admire your creative poem ,keep it up huny
hey dear whatever you criticize I'll appreciate your opinion
what i meant by those two last lines was whatever you dreamt and
did your best to make that dream to come true don't be disappointed
if it fed away just consider it as a test in your life
thanks for passing by and i really be happy when i see your comment
Petunia
03-05-2010, 02:10 PM
These line are beautiful and touching . They are the outcome of strong imaginative mind
The more you write , the more perfect you will be . So keep on and make the sky's the limit
thank you brother your words they are really motivated but i'm not that much perfect writer at all
i just expressed the inner feelings with some imaginative thoughts
well each line that you wrote is highly appreciated
best wishes
BloumagrieT
03-05-2010, 03:24 PM
Whatever you did your best
Never be afraid to take a test
Never feel shy to try and never feel shy to fail
One day some of your dreams will come true
Thank you dearest
pink-pen
DIMPLES
05-05-2010, 10:52 PM
pink-pen
you cant imagine how much i was
joyful while reading your interesting
poem..I am proud of you dear
I expect you to be a rival to the
english poets..
dont feel surprised because you CAN
^_^
Sun rays
05-05-2010, 11:02 PM
So beautiful words
keep going
جاكوار2
05-05-2010, 11:17 PM
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:lost lady:
06-05-2010, 12:27 AM
Thanks a lot for sharing with us your lovely lines
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superb words my dear
go on
Petunia
10-05-2010, 12:15 AM
Whatever you did your best
Never be afraid to take a test
Never feel shy to try and never feel shy to fail
One day some of your dreams will come true
Thank you dearest
pink-pen
you are most welcome sis
really i appreciate your visiting
thanks wish you the same dear
Petunia
10-05-2010, 12:19 AM
pink-pen
you cant imagine how much i was
joyful while reading your interesting
poem..I am proud of you dear
I expect you to be a rival to the
english poets..
dont feel surprised because you CAN
^_^
LOL can you imagine i would be a poets...oh come on
i don't think so lol
glade dear cause of your motivation..really thank you
Petunia
10-05-2010, 12:21 AM
So beautiful words
keep going
thank you for the nice words
and for passing by
my respect to you
Petunia
10-05-2010, 12:22 AM
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thanks jojo
happy to see you around sis
Petunia
10-05-2010, 12:24 AM
Thanks a lot for sharing with us your lovely lines
my pleasure dear
thanks for being here
Petunia
10-05-2010, 12:26 AM
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superb words my dear
go on
well really happy to see here friend
you surprise me when i found your reply
thanks for passing by
محمد الحافظ
02-08-2010, 08:14 AM
you deserve it .. all the replies above were beautiful and you really deserved those ones .. your words were touching and they reflected your faith and soul . thank you and i hope i was a nice guest
Petunia
04-08-2010, 02:48 AM
you deserve it .. all the replies above were beautiful and you really deserved those ones .. your words were touching and they reflected your faith and soul . thank you and i hope i was a nice guest
thank you brother a lot for the compliment
your passing and comment are highly appreciated
and you are welcome here
:)
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