aussie
03-05-2010, 12:05 PM
this is a poem by a simple guy
i hope to hear your opinions about it
Tattooed Hooves
The outline of horses' hooves
are tattooed into the drought-baked road
White clay gravel hard, and the echo of the long-past canter
chips the hidden resonance of this seldom used road.
Only the soft sibilance
of rain will free the hoof imprints,
free them to chase echoes of a ride taken
along the rattling throat of drought
your honest opinions are valuable to me
Regards
i hope to hear your opinions about it
Tattooed Hooves
The outline of horses' hooves
are tattooed into the drought-baked road
White clay gravel hard, and the echo of the long-past canter
chips the hidden resonance of this seldom used road.
Only the soft sibilance
of rain will free the hoof imprints,
free them to chase echoes of a ride taken
along the rattling throat of drought
your honest opinions are valuable to me
Regards