مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : do not ask me
eastrenrose
11-05-2010, 12:49 AM
Do not ask me
Ask your heart
Ask my eyes
Who do they hide ?
Do not ask me
Ask my heart
Who does live inside?
Do not ask for my love
But ask me ...
If my heart still alive!
Do not ask heart ,
You left behind
Ask your self ,
What have you lost
Do not ask me ,
To open a new page
When you tear them all
Do not ask me ,
Ask your love ....
Is it true or just lie?
writen by Eastrenrose
So touching and emotional , thanks a lot
aussie
11-05-2010, 01:35 AM
it is a good poem brother
but you have one mistake if not more
the 4th line
Who do they hide ?
it's better to say
Whom do they hide ?
LO butterfly LO
11-05-2010, 01:37 AM
woooooooooow
it is so Beautiful
rose rani
11-05-2010, 03:24 PM
sooooooooooooooooooooo
gentle words
thank you so much for sharing us
سماسمA
12-05-2010, 05:13 PM
.....thank you for these nice words
:lost lady:
12-05-2010, 05:44 PM
Nice one sweety
thanks for sharing with us your sweet poem
eastrenrose
13-05-2010, 03:47 PM
thanks for all who read it and for these useful comments
thanks dear assuie for correct my mistake :smile (101):i
BloumagrieT
13-05-2010, 05:55 PM
Sweet and gentle
It shows how sensitive you are
Thank you sweet
eastrenrose
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eastrenrose
15-05-2010, 09:21 PM
Thanks dear for reading and this nice comment
أنــفاس عــمان
18-05-2010, 05:56 AM
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eastrenrose
18-05-2010, 11:55 PM
:smile (101):Thanks sis for passing by
♥√•كـ ♫ ـانت هـنا㋡
21-05-2010, 04:33 PM
Strong words full of emotions
Many Thanks to you
eastrenrose
24-05-2010, 09:48 PM
Thanks for reading it
Al7elwa
27-05-2010, 04:28 AM
gooooooooooooood
eastrenrose
31-05-2010, 01:30 PM
Thanks for passing by
Al7elwa
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