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احمد الغامدي
25-05-2010, 02:50 PM
I visited these countries because her nature beautiful and her weather beautiful. And also I visited these countries for treatment form a disease. I visited these countries because these countries are very famous. I visited these countries to learn English. These two paragraphs about the country which I visited and her beautiful nature

Today I will write about the country which I visited and her beautiful nature. I visited from of the countries the state of France. And also I went to the state of Canada. I went to many other countries . I was there to spend time beautiful with my family and to spend my holiday there. I hope I can visit Malaysia in the coming holiday because it is a beautiful

ACME
25-05-2010, 03:01 PM
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هذا هو التصحيح والتعديل
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I visited these countries because of their beautiful nature and their beautiful weather . And also I visited these countries for treatment form a disease. I visited these countries because they are very famous. I visited these countries to learn English. These two paragraphs are about the country which I visited and its beautiful nature.

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Today I will write about the country which I visited and its beautiful nature. I visited France and Canada. I went to many other countries . I was there to spend happy and beautiful times with my family and to spend my holiday there. I hope I can visit Malaysia in the coming holiday because it is beautiful

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@ محمد @
25-05-2010, 03:04 PM
I visited these countries because her nature


beautiful and her weather beautiful. And also


I visited these countries for treatment form a disease. I visited these countries because these countries are very famous. I visited these countries to learn English. These two paragraphs about the country which I visited and her beautiful nature

Today I will write about the country which I visited and her beautiful nature. I visited from of the countries the state of France. And also I went to the state of Canada. I went to many other countries . I was there to spend time beautiful with my family and to spend my holiday there. I hope I can visit Malaysia in the coming holiday because it is a beautiful


هذا اللي قدرت عليه اخوي اعذرني اذا كان في قصور


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احمد الغامدي
25-05-2010, 10:44 PM
:guy face (39):

احمد الغامدي
25-05-2010, 10:44 PM
شكرا للجميع وجزاكم الله الف خير