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smack
15-06-2010, 09:11 PM
paragraph about split up


There are several reasons that make husband and wife split up.one of these reasons according to husband,when the husband is feeling unintently.for example:when the husband return from the job and does not available a good shower,not prepare food,and the wife is sleeping.this things make the husband feel sadness.second reasons according to husband,when the wife more excitable and behaving unpleasant especially when talk with her about some matters such as ,parents,spending money etc.one of these reasons according to wife.when the husband gaze intently on another woman and make relationship with her.second reasons according to wife.the husband make some bad customs like drink alcohol,take drugs, etc.this things make the wife feel resentment.In conclusion,should on wife and husband behave easy going and understandable each other to ensure good life to children.

IF any one notic error plz tell me

مصطفى على فرج
16-06-2010, 11:27 PM
يجب مراعاة الاتىis feeling = feels
make= makes


وعنوان الموضوع ارى من الافضل يكتب

THE REASONS OF DIVORCING


THANKS FOR FOR YOUR EFFORTS:smile (101):

smack
17-06-2010, 01:08 AM
Thanks my brother to give your opinion in my paragraph and I wil focus in these error in the another time.