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السسسسلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته ...

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Would you want to combine two cultures, or more than two? Would you like to speak with foreign people? If so, you should learn English. There are several ways to learn any language, but the skills do not change: they include listening, grammar, reading, writing, CONJ speaking. These skills are important to learn any language, including English, and every single skill need (VA) time and energy .
Being an active listener it (UNNCES) is a very useful way to care about others when they speak . Ask about what it means? (NOT A COMPLETE SENTENCE) listen carefully and ask questions to clarify if possible (NOT A COMPLETE SENTENCE). Naturally, children learn their first language through listening to others . (W PUCNT) so follow their method by watching TV programs PUNCT + CONJ movies and news broad cast. Listening is actually really a (WO) great way to improve your skills.
Another important skill is grammar. Without grammar you aren’t (DO NOT USE CONTRACTIONS, USE ARE NOT) able to understand much speech. Your knowledge of grammar allow (VA) you to understand some materialsPUNCT such as part of speech, tenses, and modals. Studying grammar is tough because you have to figure out the meaning of phrasal verbs and idioms PUNCT + REL PRON looks like math but without a calculator. Even though it is extremely easy (WW), you should try to learn it.
Reading is an interesting way to learn a new language. it builds your vocabulary and enhance your writing skills (PLEASE JOIN THESE TWO SENTENCES). Since (W CONJ) the reader can't understand the meaning of a specific passage. (W PUNCT) He or she can observe the context clues, definition, and punctuation. Also, reading develops your independence and autonomy because you have to do it by yourself.
Finally, all skill (S/PL) are strongly attached; in other words, we can't tell them apart. Can we have writing without reading? Can we have grammar without speaking? Can you be a good speaker without being an active listener? I believe that answer is no. (W PUNCT) and I feel that learning a new language and specially English is amazing because it is a global language.

[Petunia]

وعليكم السلام ورحمة الله وبركاته

هلا بيك اختي


عدلت عليه كمان زدت بعض الجمل وان شاء الله تمام كذا

واذا احد عنده اي تعديل يتفضل مشكور





Would you want to combine two cultures, or more than two?

Would you like to speak with foreign people? If so, you should

learn English. There are several ways to learn any language but

the skills do not change: they include listening, grammar,

reading, writing, speaking. These skills are important to learn any

language, including English, and each skill needs time and energy .

if you want to be a good listener, it is very important to listen to

others when they speak in order to improve your listening skill

and if you didn't understand what they said, you can sk them

,what did they mean ? so ,listen carefully and ask questions to

clarify if possible. Naturally, children acquire their first language

by listening to others . so you can follow their method ; as a result

,you'll develop your listening skill, by watching movies , TV

programs and news broadcast. Actually, Listening is considered as

a great way to improve your skills because all skills firstly depend

on it. Another important skill, is grammar. Without grammar you

are not able to understand much speech. Your enough knowledge

of grammar allow you to understand sentence structures ; for

example , part of speech , tenses, and modals. You study grammar

rules by using grammar materials for practicing what you have

learned ,Grammar is tough because you have to figure out the

meaning of different structures of phrases and clauses .Theses

elements are look like math numbers order but without adverbs

and idioms . You should try to learn it even though you see it an

easy to learn .Reading is an interesting way to learn a new

language because that builds your vocabulary and enhance your

writing skills . When the reader can't understand the meaning of

a specific passage, he or she can observe the context clues,

definition, and punctuation. Also, reading develops your

independence and autonomy because you have to do it by yourself.

Finally, all skills are strongly attached; in other words, we can't

tell them apart. Can we have writing without reading! Can we

have grammar without speaking! Can you be a good speaker

without being an active listener! I believe the answer for sure will

be, no and I feel that learning a new language and specially

English is amazing because it is a global language


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[b_dour]

الله يسسسسسسعدك ويحقق لك كل الي تتمنينه ....

كلمة شكرا قليله بحقك .....

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