مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : I am lonely
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Life is a strange book...No matter how much I OBSERVE it...I can never predict what the next page will bring me...Sometimes the cool breeze brings nice stories with it,I START DREAMING...With open eyes,and a little smile on my face....The dream goes on and I slowly and silently creep behind it...I forget its a dream...The happiness touches my heart and the mirth penetrates my ears so deep that I forget the truth.The dream then pulls me closer and wraps its hands around my eyes.It hides...
Something...something I don't wanna see...It whispers a sweet song into my ears...A song I always craved to hear.I get elated and absorbed in the feeling...
...An electic rain starts to pour over me and I feel it cleanse my heart and soul...Suddenly my mind start to realise something and heads towards reality,But the dream embraces me so tight that I force my heart to stay back...The dream caresses my head and gives me warmth, I haven't felt for long.....I hold on to the dream really tight,Snuggle up and fall asleep...
...But dreams are ephemeral...the harsh daylight pulls me back to reality...I open my eyes...wake up to an empty world.Where I don't even have someone I can share my dream with.An unknown pain starts hurting me...I close my eyes again...In hope to return to the dream again.....but its lost.....with closed eyes and dumb voice I start talking to myself...
Nothing changes,excepting the realisation that I'm lonely again and this is how I Express my "LONELINESS".....
MAN9OOOOL
Waiting for your comments.
● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆
01-07-2010, 08:44 PM
Sir
Your words are full of emotions, sorrow
It is true when we cannot change our reality we escape to our dreams
Where good things can happen
Your words sir really touch my heart
Thank you for sharing
غُـربــ وطن ـة
01-07-2010, 09:23 PM
Thank u Sir
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I like the previous lines so much
in them i found an image for my life
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sometimes , we escape from struggles of our life
to dreams
in them we find happy moments , kind people
...But dreams are ephemeral...the harsh daylight pulls me back to reality...I open my eyes...wake up to an empty world.Where I don't even have someone I can share my dream with.An unknown pain starts hurting me...I close my eyes again...In hope to return to the dream again.....but its lost.....with closed eyes and dumb voice I start talking to myself...
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Sir
Your words are full of emotions, sorrow
It is true when we cannot change our reality we escape to our dreams
Where good things can happen
Your words sir really touch my heart
Thank you for sharing
Thanks for your post . I enjoyed reading your lines . They are expressive
Thank u Sir
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I like the previous lines so much
in them i found an image for my life
***
sometimes , we escape from struggles of our life
to dreams
in them we find happy moments , kind people
...But dreams are ephemeral...the harsh daylight pulls me back to reality...I open my eyes...wake up to an empty world.Where I don't even have someone I can share my dream with.An unknown pain starts hurting me...I close my eyes again...In hope to return to the dream again.....but its lost.....with closed eyes and dumb voice I start talking to myself...
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I am happy you liked those lines . You expressed your opinion clearly
It's said that life comes with no guarantees . We always escape its
downs and look for its ups even in our dreams . Many thanks to you
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rose rani
02-07-2010, 05:31 PM
yes our life is like abook
but we don't know what is the end
or what will happen next
untill we achieve this moment
so thank you sir for sharing us
yes our life is like abook
but we don't know what is the end
or what will happen next
untill we achieve this moment
so thank you sir for sharing us
Thanks for your opinion . It's highly appreciated
♥√•كـ ♫ ـانت هـنا㋡
03-07-2010, 08:17 AM
Dreams are ephemeral...the harsh daylight pulls me back to reality...I open my eyes...wake up to an empty world.Where I don't even have someone I can share my dream with.An unknown pain starts hurting me...I close my eyes again...In hope to return to the dream again.....but its lost.....with closed eyes and dumb voice I start talking to myself...
Nothing changes,excepting the realisation that I'm lonely again and this is how I Express my "LONELINESS".....
that is wonderful Sir
I like it its a beautiful lines with great meanings
Many thanx to u
آنسهOoفكره
03-07-2010, 02:43 PM
I forget its a dream...The happiness touches my heart and the mirth penetrates my ears so deep that I forget the truth.The dream then pulls me closer and wraps its hands around my eyes.It hides...
Something...something I don't wanna see...It whispers a sweet song into my ears...A song I always craved to hear.I get elated and absorbed in the feeling...
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what a sweet Isolation dreams always make you live in..
there is only you , your dreams & no1 else
when you once live in this isolation
you won't give up on it ..
You will be addicted to it..
& you start to be far from Reality which
is Pain. though you've this free spirit
you still somehow ,attached to the reality,,
that you are still alone,
that your dreams still mean everything
not 4 any1 but you,,,
wonderful lines ,,
thank u 4 sharing it here..Sir..
Dreams are ephemeral...the harsh daylight pulls me back to reality...I open my eyes...wake up to an empty world.Where I don't even have someone I can share my dream with.An unknown pain starts hurting me...I close my eyes again...In hope to return to the dream again.....but its lost.....with closed eyes and dumb voice I start talking to myself...
Nothing changes,excepting the realisation that I'm lonely again and this is how I Express my "LONELINESS".....
that is wonderful Sir
I like it its a beautiful lines with great meanings
Many thanx to u
It's my great pleasure you liked those lines . Thanks for being here
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what a sweet Isolation dreams always make you live in..
there is only you , your dreams & no1 else
when you once live in this isolation
you won't give up on it ..
You will be addicted to it..
& you start to be far from Reality which
is Pain. though you've this free spirit
you still somehow ,attached to the reality,,
that you are still alone,
that your dreams still mean everything
not 4 any1 but you,,,
wonderful lines ,,
thank u 4 sharing it here..Sir..
Your addition to the topic is of great importance . It sheds some light on the
way dreams isolate us from reality and create for us a beautiful place that
we do not want to go out of . We rarely venture going back to reality . Thanks a lot
.
[Your Words remind me of a GREAT nashed]
"You Are NEVER alone"
W1E1IMycJbk
mooleymoon
03-07-2010, 11:36 PM
Nothing changes,excepting the realisation that I'm lonely again
this is the harsh reality
thanks alot for those lines
[Your Words remind me of a GREAT nashed]
"You Are NEVER alone"
W1E1IMycJbk
Thanks alot for being here
smack
04-07-2010, 10:45 PM
It is difficult to feel the person lonely, and should the person defy the life and struggle to stay inside it. In my opinion anyone pluck on anything's he want ultimately get it. Thanks a lot my brother and I hope from you more.
M.o_o.N
05-07-2010, 11:02 PM
I like it , but to be honest I am somehow sad now
I am going back to the previouse topic "Be Positive" lol
Thanx brother
Nothing changes,excepting the realisation that I'm lonely again
this is the harsh reality
thanks alot for those lines
Thanks for being here
Reading it, I flew far away. I do feel lonely sometimes and this triggers the thinking about the purpose of my life!
I believe when we were kids, we didn’t have the sense of detachment from the environment as we felt we were a part of the nature including parents and pets as well. You may notice that kids love to be surrounded by people, animals, and other kids. They treat animals as a part of their families.
Unfortunately, we do not retain these feelings as we become adults (causing bad emotions). This is why loving each other is VERY important
You have a nice day
Thanks for reading it
It is difficult to feel the person lonely, and should the person defy the life and struggle to stay inside it. In my opinion anyone pluck on anything's he want ultimately get it. Thanks a lot my brother and I hope from you more.
Many thanks for being here . Your visit is appreciated
I like it , but to be honest I am somehow sad now
I am going back to the previouse topic "Be Positive" lol
Thanx brother
Thanks a lot for being here
ツأميمة الأحمديツ
17-07-2010, 07:05 PM
othing changes,excepting the realisation that I'm lonely again and this is how I Express my "LONELINESS".....
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