a dream

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

Under that tree he was setting watching the waves

He looks very old, sad, and lonely

Life did not treat him gently, I can see that

To him I was going with nothing but my love

Are you lost my dear? That what he said when I reached him

No, no

So what brought you here?

You

Me

Yes

Why

To take your hand

To where

To the sea don’t you want to go there

Yes, how did you know

Your eyes, they were following the tide

Do not you want to go

Rising his head so slowly, I can see his smile now

Yes, but my legs are so week


Don’t worry, I said. I will catch you if you fall


Tears running down proudly, yes, yes you will catch me

I hope you will like it

[الشموخ 9]

thanx dear
we enjoy it

[ACME]

Thanks so much .It's very touching

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

thanx dear
we enjoy it
thanks
for your lovely words

[M.o_o.N]

very nice my dear sister , simple and easy. I liked it . Keep writing and do your best I am sure that will improve your writings Insha Allah.

I have to tell you one point , be careful while writing. You'v miss spelled some words and that changed the meaning. Like "see" you surely meant "sea" . Also "know" you meant "now" . Tiny mistakes but to be a great writer you should avoid such mistakes.

Again, thank you huny for sharing with us
Happy to be here :D

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

Thanks so much .It's very touching

thank you sir

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

very nice my dear sister , simple and easy. I liked it . Keep writing and do your best I am sure that will improve your writings Insha Allah.

I have to tell you one point , be careful while writing. You'v miss spelled some words and that changed the meaning. Like "see" you surely meant "sea" . Also "know" you meant "now" . Tiny mistakes but to be a great writer you should avoid such mistakes.

Again, thank you huny for sharing with us
Happy to be here :D

thank you
:smile (101):

[The tolerant]

thanks my dear
i wish u the best of luck

[rose rani]

lovely lines


thanks for sharing

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

thanks my dear
i wish u the best of luck
thank you my dear for your support

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

lovely lines


thanks for sharing
i am so happy that you like it
thank you

[smack]

Perfect and influent. Thanks a lot my sister and I hope from you more.
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[zainah]

think you sweetie
you have a talent sure but you need to improve it by reading
and keep it up

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

Perfect and influent. Thanks a lot my sister and I hope from you more.
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smack

Your words like a candle for me they spread joy and happiness .So thank you

[postgraduate]

Sun Light

Great image .Thanks alot

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

think you sweetie
you have a talent sure but you need to improve it by reading
and keep it up

thank you.

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

Sun Light

Great image .Thanks alot

postgraduate
you are most welcome
and thank you for your lovely words

[LO butterfly LO]

thanks http://www5.0zz0.com/2007/12/07/20/61043092.gif

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

thanks http://www5.0zz0.com/2007/12/07/20/61043092.gif

you are welcome my dear

[mooleymoon]

i love it
simple and so touching
thanks alot
^^

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

i love it
simple and so touching
thanks alot
^^

mooleymoon

I am so touching by your lovely words thank you dear.