writing about my studying outside

[b_dour]

السسسسلام عليكم ياحلووه

اعتذر على جرأتي لكن لولا عجلتي ...

طلب مني الاستاذ اكتب برقرافين من غير عنوان كريزون بسسس

الاول كتبت فيه سبب تواجدي بامريكا وهو لدراسة اللغه ..

السبب الثاني وحطيته ببرقراف ثاني وهو رغبتي بالدراسه بجامعتها . طبعا نقصت فيهم بالهبل ...

حاليا يبغى مني احط لهم انتردوكشن وتفاديا من اني انقص اكثر اتمنى انك تصصحين لي وتضيفين لو حابه واكون لك شاكره

every one has a serious part in his mind to think about meaningful things like futur. so, because i care too much about my futur and i beilive on my self , i decided to come to states .studying in siu is exited, but inthe begining its recuire studying thier language to be able to share other students chairs .

[Petunia]

السلام عليكم ورحمه الله وبركاته

اختي مون متغيبه لفتره باجازه


بس انتي معلش اكتبي نوع الدارسه تبع الجامعه ومعلومات عنها لدراسه اللغه بس او انك حابه تدرسي انجليزي اداب او غيره


وان شاء الله اساعدك والاخوه والاخوات ان شاء الله مارح يقصروا


بالتوفيق

[Petunia]

اختي هذا ممكن تخلينه على شكل انترودكشن

يتكلم عن مدى اهميه اللغه الانجليزيه كلغه عالميه




English is the only language that is spoken or is understood in almost all the countries of the world. Not only is it the commonest and most popular language the world over that transcends geographical and cultural barriers.English is a wide spread tool of communication in both the developed and developing nations, used as a medium for pursuing higher education, for conducting business and commerce, for writing books and journals on various subjects






طيب هذا تعديلي للبراقراف الي انتي كتبتي وزدته كمان



everyone has a serious part in his mind to think about meaningful things for his or her future. so, because of this reason I care very much about my futur and I believe in myself and ability , I decided to come to the United States but I found that in the beginning it requires studying thier language to be able to share other students chairs beside that I must be a good English language speaker to enroll in their universities .I found that studying is very exiting there. Moreover,I can learn from its native speaker and practice in a real social context .As a result, that can help me to understand English language by enhancing my previous knowledge that I have learned before



اي حاجه تحتاجيها او زياده انا هنا



موفقه:)

[appliedlinguist]

اتوقع الاخت بنك بن ماقصرت
تقدرين تتأكدين من السبلنق لان اكثر مشاكلك تقريبا سبلنق انك تكتبين في برنامج الورد وخو يتصحح تلقائي

[البـارع]

الف شكر مشرفتنا
يعطيك العافية

[b_dour]

السسسلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته ...

كيف حالك اختي بنك بن ؟ اعتذر على التطفل .. لكن كالعاده مجبره اختكم
لابطله ....

بحكم ما شالله ابداعك بالبرقراف الي عدلتيه لي خاصه ان درجتي تعدلت بشكل ملحوظ والحمممدلله حبيت اشكرك اولا وثانيا... حبيت
استأذنك بمشاركتي بكتابه خاتمه لنفس موضوعي حق قدومي لامريكا الي هو لدراسة اللغه اولا ومن ثم دراسة الجامعه ...
اختي فضلا لا امرا حبيت اكلمك شويا من بدري على اساس اعطي نفس فررصه اكتب واوريكي تعدلي وتزيدي .. ومن جهه حبيت يكون كلامنا بالرسايل الخاصه لان استاذنا حذرنا من استعاناتنا بالنت وانها يمكن تعتبر تقصير بحل الواجب او سرقه ادبيه ..... واخيرا حبيت اقولك انو انا هوموركي اسي وقالي الاستاذ انه ما فيه ثيسسز لو كان عندك خبره عن هالفكره ياليت تعلميني كيف انهي كل برقراف بطريقه واضحه ...

اتمنى تعذريني ... حبيت اتواصل معك بالرسايل الخاصه بس مو راضي ...

الف شكر

[M.o_o.N]

تم دمج الموضوعين في طلب واحد


السلام عليكم اختي


شلونك عساك بخير؟ :)


اطلعت على موضوعك و البرجرافات اللي كتبتها اختي بنك بن


حابة اوضح لك شغلة اللي هي انهاء البراجراف ينتهي بإنتهاء الفكرة و كنهاية للمقال حلو انك تنهيه بنفس الفكرة الرئيسية بحيث انك تلخصي كل الكلام اللي في المقال بسطر او سطرين


وهنا كتبت لك هالخاتمة الطيبة



English is the mother tongue of some million people, and the second language of an equally large number of speakers. English is not only useful it also gives me a lot of satisfaction because I am doing my best to learn it and now I am a good student. Learning English will help me to communicate with friends who speak a different language. I came to USA to improve my English and I know It is necessary to learn English if I am planning to study at American university .




أقرائيها بتمعن و قولي لي رأيك بها



موفقة عزيزتي

[b_dour]

b_dour



العفو اختي ربي يسلمك

معليش دوبني اشوف ردك


الي بالاحمر التعديل



Everyone has a serious part in his or her minds to think about meaningful things
in his or her life . That why I care too much about my future and I believe in myself and my ability. So, I decided to come to the United States to study physiology. However, i found that in the beginning it requires studying English language to be able to read the text, understand, and discuss with other students or challenge them. Besides that I have to be a good English speaker to enroll in their universities. Many people travel to this country to get different desires or puropses such as learning English, having experiences, and earning certificate as me.

Improving my English language skills is my first goal when I decided to continue my education. An English institute offers many opportunities to enhance learning language for instant Where I can talk to native speakers , study with foreign students , institute attending .all of these have forced me to build my vocabulary . All of these things are making us ready to engagelife university .



Another reason, I came to the united states in order to study in university as physiology student .it is one of my long term goals graduation from it ,going back to my country finding a job in one of the best research center to work on people genetic samples. The united states have an important and significant technology in several fields. One of them is physiology .the united states are offering many subjects for their universities for example, neurophysiology, immune physiology, and molecular physiology .


In conclusion, English is the mother tongue of some million people, and the second language of an equally large number of speakers. English is not only can be the most useful language, it also gives me a lot of satisfaction because I am doing my best to learn it and now I am a good student. I came to USA to improve my English and I know It is necessary to learn English for my studying plan at American University.


معلش اختي عملت تعديل بالخطا على مشاركتك بدل الاقتباس:smile (9):اعذريني

[M.o_o.N]

لا ماشاء الله قرأته كذا على السريع و شايفته تمااااااااااااااام


ربنا يوفقك و يكتب لك الخير


:)

[Petunia]

applield linguistics

تشكري اختي على المرور


ربي يوفقك


البارع


الله يعافيك استاذنا الفاضل


تشكر على المرور



M.OO.N


جزاك الله خير غاليتي على ردك ماقصرتي^^



b_dour



بالتوفيق اختي

[M.o_o.N]

الله يعافيك Pink pen
:smile (35):

[b_dour]

مررررحبااا .....

بنك بن + موووون وربي قولة شكرا ما تكفي تعبكم معاي الله يجزاكم الجنه وييسرلكم كل عسير ويسعدكم دنيا واخره ويحقق لكم كل امانيكم ..

تحياتي