مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : At night by sun light
● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆
02-08-2010, 07:07 PM
At night
At night where all dreams try
To find their path to the light
I was sitting next to my bed praying
For my dying wishes to become a live
Sadness covers my eyes with lies
Telling me you are alone no one by your side
My poor soul was screaming
Like a summer storm thunder
I want to breathe to hold
Those dreams and join the light
Fears hunted my courage down
Sending my wings to the dark
Tears start running like a salty river
Burying my beloved roses inside my heart
By sun light
I hope you like it, please let me see your evaluation
It means a lot to me
rose rani
02-08-2010, 07:23 PM
such a wonderful writer you are my
dear sister
I have enjoyed reading it
keep up
I enjoyed reading those sad ^^lines indeed . They are expressive
Keep on writing . Best wishes
● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆
03-08-2010, 05:26 PM
such a wonderful writer you are my
dear sister
I have enjoyed reading it
keep up
rose rani
my dear friend you are my sun thank you for your lovely words
:smile (27)::smile (27)::smile (27):
● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆
04-08-2010, 02:35 AM
I enjoyed reading those sad ^^lines indeed . They are expressive
Keep on writing . Best wishes
thank you sir for your words they mean alot to me and i wish you the best
Petunia
04-08-2010, 03:19 AM
I can see thay your words reflect your true and honest feelings
I have enjoyed reading your writing sis
so
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♥√•كـ ♫ ـانت هـنا㋡
04-08-2010, 06:48 AM
I really enjoy reading
its more than perfect
May Allah bless you
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● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆
05-08-2010, 05:30 PM
I can see thay your words reflect your true and honest feelings
I have enjoyed reading your writing sis
so
keep going http://www.google.com.sa/images/cleardot.gif
Petunia
thank you dear sis for reading and for supporting my writing
ehssas23
06-08-2010, 12:25 PM
do not be sad
always smile
your words are lovely
keep it up sis
abu ghararah
06-08-2010, 01:14 PM
I have enjoyed reading your writing
Could I ask you one more favor?
You can do anything, it seems.
Tell him that he's your love, life
happiness and dreams.
My poor soul was screaming
● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆
06-08-2010, 06:05 PM
I really enjoy reading
its more than perfect
May Allah bless you
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Sense*;
thank you my dear friend for your support and for being here
● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆
07-08-2010, 03:49 AM
do not be sad
always smile
your words are lovely
keep it up sis
ehssas23
thank you dear
mossab
08-08-2010, 01:36 AM
[Your choice for topics is always beautiful
and
keep going in great works
Endless Hope
08-08-2010, 02:19 AM
Lovely Poem
I realy like it
● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆
09-08-2010, 06:53 AM
Lovely Poem
I realy like it
Endless Hope
thank you my dear sis
● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆
10-08-2010, 02:20 AM
I have enjoyed reading your writing
Could I ask you one more favor?
You can do anything, it seems.
Tell him that he's your love, life
happiness and dreams.
My poor soul was screaming
abu ghararah
I am so happy that you like it but believe me when I say that this poem is out of my imagination
thank you
:lost lady:
12-08-2010, 11:05 PM
Sun light
Remarkable lines dear
I really enjoyed reading a lot
dear sis ,,keep it plz
we are waiting for more and more
Wish you all the best
sweetie
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● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆
15-08-2010, 04:37 AM
Sun light
Remarkable lines dear
I really enjoyed reading a lot
dear sis ,,keep it plz
we are waiting for more and more
Wish you all the best
sweetie
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lost lady
my dear friend i am so happy for having you here
and for every word you wrote for me so thank you
ツأميمة الأحمديツ
18-08-2010, 05:33 PM
so nice
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● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆
19-08-2010, 06:31 PM
[Your choice for topics is always beautiful
and
keep going in great works
mossab
thank you i will in sha Allah
● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆
29-08-2010, 12:41 AM
so nice
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ღثَرَےالْمَدِينَهـღ
you are most welcome dear
nini15
29-10-2010, 08:19 PM
may Allah bless you
إجتماعي
30-10-2010, 12:14 AM
what kind of Wonderful words are these?0
I really enjoyed
waiting more & more
umhamodi22
30-10-2010, 09:45 AM
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