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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : At night by sun light



● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆
02-08-2010, 07:07 PM
At night

At night where all dreams try

To find their path to the light

I was sitting next to my bed praying

For my dying wishes to become a live

Sadness covers my eyes with lies

Telling me you are alone no one by your side

My poor soul was screaming

Like a summer storm thunder

I want to breathe to hold

Those dreams and join the light

Fears hunted my courage down

Sending my wings to the dark

Tears start running like a salty river

Burying my beloved roses inside my heart

By sun light

I hope you like it, please let me see your evaluation
It means a lot to me

rose rani
02-08-2010, 07:23 PM
such a wonderful writer you are my

dear sister

I have enjoyed reading it

keep up

ACME
02-08-2010, 07:48 PM
I enjoyed reading those sad ^^lines indeed . They are expressive
Keep on writing . Best wishes

● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆
03-08-2010, 05:26 PM
such a wonderful writer you are my

dear sister

I have enjoyed reading it

keep up

rose rani

my dear friend you are my sun thank you for your lovely words

:smile (27)::smile (27)::smile (27):

● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆
04-08-2010, 02:35 AM
I enjoyed reading those sad ^^lines indeed . They are expressive
Keep on writing . Best wishes

thank you sir for your words they mean alot to me and i wish you the best

Petunia
04-08-2010, 03:19 AM
I can see thay your words reflect your true and honest feelings


I have enjoyed reading your writing sis


so



keep going http://www.google.com.sa/images/cleardot.gif

♥√•كـ ♫ ـانت ‏هـنا㋡
04-08-2010, 06:48 AM
I really enjoy reading


its more than perfect


May Allah bless you

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● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆
05-08-2010, 05:30 PM
I can see thay your words reflect your true and honest feelings


I have enjoyed reading your writing sis


so



keep going http://www.google.com.sa/images/cleardot.gif

Petunia


thank you dear sis for reading and for supporting my writing

ehssas23
06-08-2010, 12:25 PM
do not be sad
always smile

your words are lovely

keep it up sis

abu ghararah
06-08-2010, 01:14 PM
I have enjoyed reading your writing
Could I ask you one more favor?
You can do anything, it seems.
Tell him that he's your love, life
happiness and dreams.

My poor soul was screaming

● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆
06-08-2010, 06:05 PM
I really enjoy reading


its more than perfect


May Allah bless you

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Sense*;
thank you my dear friend for your support and for being here

● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆
07-08-2010, 03:49 AM
do not be sad
always smile

your words are lovely

keep it up sis

ehssas23

thank you dear

mossab
08-08-2010, 01:36 AM
[Your choice for topics is always beautiful
and
keep going in great works

Endless Hope
08-08-2010, 02:19 AM
Lovely Poem

I realy like it

● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆
09-08-2010, 06:53 AM
Lovely Poem

I realy like it

Endless Hope


thank you my dear sis

● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆
10-08-2010, 02:20 AM
I have enjoyed reading your writing
Could I ask you one more favor?
You can do anything, it seems.
Tell him that he's your love, life
happiness and dreams.

My poor soul was screaming

abu ghararah
I am so happy that you like it but believe me when I say that this poem is out of my imagination
thank you

:lost lady:
12-08-2010, 11:05 PM
Sun light
Remarkable lines dear
I really enjoyed reading a lot
dear sis ,,keep it plz
we are waiting for more and more
Wish you all the best

sweetie

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● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆
15-08-2010, 04:37 AM
Sun light
Remarkable lines dear
I really enjoyed reading a lot
dear sis ,,keep it plz
we are waiting for more and more
Wish you all the best

sweetie

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lost lady

my dear friend i am so happy for having you here
and for every word you wrote for me so thank you

ツأميمة الأحمديツ
18-08-2010, 05:33 PM
so nice
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● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆
19-08-2010, 06:31 PM
[Your choice for topics is always beautiful
and
keep going in great works


mossab

thank you i will in sha Allah

● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆
29-08-2010, 12:41 AM
so nice
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ღثَرَےالْمَدِينَهـღ

you are most welcome dear

nini15
29-10-2010, 08:19 PM
may Allah bless you

إجتماعي
30-10-2010, 12:14 AM
what kind of Wonderful words are these?0
I really enjoyed
waiting more & more

umhamodi22
30-10-2010, 09:45 AM
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