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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : love wind



eastrenrose
05-08-2010, 03:56 PM
:small (206):Love wind


When the wind blew next to my window
It carries all the past remains with dust
Of the old love ruins
Oh !here we go again the same whistle
Wake all the sleeping seeds,
It s too early. The spring not yet,
Why now, why now?
What shall I call this wind?
Is it a curse from broken heart?
Or just one of my illusions are resuscitated
I cannot distinguish these remains
Which one belong to me?
All are mixed by my tears ,
Carries my memories ,
my last moments of love
Have a warm , gentle touch
as your words
Blowing fast and rough as your love
Swung between you and me
Insist to blow in my heart again
I cannot close my window
In front of your love wind
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the-majesty
05-08-2010, 04:28 PM
Wow

I speechless in front of ur words

how amazing what u wrot

plz keep it up

I love it


thanks fo sharing us ur words

مهـرة الـروح
05-08-2010, 04:37 PM
Masha'allah

great lines

keep on

and

million thanx to ur fantastic pen

rose rani
05-08-2010, 09:18 PM
wow
wonderful lines dear
go a head

thank you for sharing us

ACME
05-08-2010, 09:21 PM
Recurrent past memories happen to everyone , let alone being love momories
Very emotional words and expressions . Keep going . many thanks to you

ehssas23
06-08-2010, 12:03 PM
Masha'allah
every word is talking about my past

plz keep it up
couse i like 2 read such beautiful writing

ツأميمة الأحمديツ
06-08-2010, 12:28 PM
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ツأميمة الأحمديツ
06-08-2010, 12:28 PM
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abu ghararah
06-08-2010, 01:09 PM
i like it
I softly kissed my fingertips
and blew into the wind.
I whispered, please carry these
with all the love I have to send.

eastrenrose
06-08-2010, 11:34 PM
Thanks for everyone who read my poem and left a nice and encourgements comments.May Allah bless you all