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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : Praying For Rain



ACME
25-08-2010, 04:39 AM
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I Hope You Like It .






It's not as if
I could feel anything
after you bled
my emotions dry
and left me there
in the scorching
aftermath of the moment

thirsting
for a single tear,
a touch of dew
a drop of rain


anything....
that could make my soul
awaken again..

Storm clouds swirl
ever ominous,
ever present

keeping at bay
the release I seek
from this darkness
overpowering me,

breaking my
spirit
Weakened

I have begged
but the screams
have now faded
turning to whispers,

through the silence
of my own stillness

I still
am here
praying for rain


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Chosen By Sirhasan .

rose rani
25-08-2010, 10:40 PM
so sad poem

thank you sir for sharing

us

postgraduate
27-08-2010, 06:45 PM
sirhasan

Well-chosen brother .Thanks alot for sharing it with us .Sure I enjoyed reading each line though it is little bit sad .Appreciated

ACME
09-09-2010, 10:01 PM
so sad poem

thank you sir for sharing

us


Thanks for your coming by . I am happy you liked it

● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆
10-09-2010, 05:36 AM
Some people are just like the rain they make our lives full of flowers and hope and when they are gone we feel that
We have lost a true friend . and what make you really sad when you ask about it and no body seems to care.

قلم الرصاص
11-09-2010, 03:23 AM
My dear brother

I liked this poem

Thank you so much

Happy Eid

ACME
11-09-2010, 11:31 AM
sirhasan

Well-chosen brother .Thanks alot for sharing it with us .Sure I enjoyed reading each line though it is little bit sad .Appreciated


I am happy to see you around . Thanks a lot

ツأميمة الأحمديツ
11-09-2010, 12:53 PM
Thanks
sir
really I enjoy it

ACME
11-09-2010, 10:06 PM
Some people are just like the rain they make our lives full of flowers and hope and when they are gone we feel that
We have lost a true friend . and what make you really sad when you ask about it and no body seems to care.

Thanks a lot for your comment

ACME
12-09-2010, 10:05 AM
My dear brother

I liked this poem

Thank you so much

Happy Eid

Thanks for coming by . Happy Eid to you , too

ACME
12-09-2010, 02:55 PM
Thanks
sir
really I enjoy it

You are most welcome

ACME
05-10-2010, 03:32 PM
Up , for more readers to enjoy

shy lady
05-10-2010, 04:58 PM
i like it
thanks for sharing it