مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : Iam going away
rose rani
07-09-2010, 01:07 AM
I am going away
To nowhere
To inside me
To collect the shattered pieces of my dreams
To face me face to face without any masks
To discover myself
It is a dark long journey
I may feel lonely
I may feel stranger
I may feel lost
But
This journey must be taken to find out
The peace inside me
To find out the happiness inside me
Because should not we find peace and happiness in ourselves
We can not find them out side with other people
I am going away to find myself
But I am sure that I am coming back
stronger person than before
by rose rani
bigevil
07-09-2010, 01:23 AM
woooow
it's a beautiful
I like it
thanks and show me more of your writing
قلم الرصاص
07-09-2010, 03:32 AM
Mash' Allah
really a beautiful words
Thank you so much
● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆
07-09-2010, 07:52 AM
So expressive and meaningful lines
Keep on writing dear sis
postgraduate
07-09-2010, 04:19 PM
Rose rani
Unlike those stories I have read about traveling I find yours marvelous. You are going away BUT not to anywhere as we might think. Your journey is heading inside of you .A lot of things inside of you such as happiness, peace and inspiration will be then discovered. What a nice trip that one is! When we just do the same thing and start traveling .It is such a beautiful sensation to live those moments. Dear rose I really enjoyed reading .Thanks a lot for giving us these moments to travel inside!
rose rani
08-09-2010, 01:01 AM
woooow
it's a beautiful
I like it
thanks and show me more of your writing
you are most welcome here
I am so glad that you like it
thank you for your beautiful passing by
prettyالسبهه
08-09-2010, 10:48 PM
ROSE RANI
ur journey is so hard as I think
some time figure out the others
is esier than discover our selves
nice wods rose
:lost lady:
08-09-2010, 11:11 PM
Wonderful trip and very expressive words
Finding yourself is not easy at all and it's not easy to look into a mirror and see your true self Rose,,you did a good job by trying to find it in those lovely words
Sweetie..keep on
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rose rani
09-09-2010, 12:08 AM
Mash' Allah
really a beautiful words
Thank you so much
thank you lovely sister for your beautiful passing by
rose rani
09-09-2010, 12:09 AM
So expressive and meaningful lines
Keep on writing dear sis
thank you sunlight for
your nice words and passing by
rose rani
10-09-2010, 04:10 PM
Rose rani
Unlike those stories I have read about traveling I find yours marvelous. You are going away BUT not to anywhere as we might think. Your journey is heading inside of you .A lot of things inside of you such as happiness, peace and inspiration will be then discovered. What a nice trip that one is! When we just do the same thing and start traveling .It is such a beautiful sensation to live those moments. Dear rose I really enjoyed reading .Thanks a lot for giving us these moments to travel inside!
discovering yourself
is so important to help a person
to go through the life
thank you so much post for being here
Iam so glad to see you here
it is always appreciated
rose rani
11-09-2010, 03:02 PM
ROSE RANI
ur journey is so hard as I think
some time figure out the others
is esier than discover our selves
nice wods rose
because we are afraid to find
out who we are
so try to find out otheres
thank you dear sis for your nice comment and
passing by
englishLo0oveR
13-09-2010, 02:15 AM
I did not understand how can I find myself, what should I do to find myself, there is only one way to can anyone find him/herself, it is by mirror, looking into your mirror it easy to see yourself and find it, but i think if you want to be stronger person and whatever you want to be , you just have to create yourself again with all your experiences. and when you love yourself and love who you are that makes you will savor and enjoy both life's pain and pleasures.
that was my opinion
and
thanks sis for sharing your thought
I'm waiting for your next writing
keep on writing
abu ghararah
14-09-2010, 03:44 AM
I wish I could travel through the time
I will change that moment I make you mine
I will turn those dark days into bright
I will win every single life’s fight
I am counting down the days
For the moment to come take me away
I am waiting for my new life
You have cut me with knife
Every hours and then days without you
Tells I can live weeks and years without you
I feel surprise when you try to hold me tight
I think its dynamite but you call it plight
M.o_o.N
14-09-2010, 04:00 AM
Thanks Rose , I liked your way of choosing the words and the rhym . The poem is so deep I just felt like Uh I should do that too and sink deep inside myself :)
Again thank you for sharing this beauty with us.
rose rani
16-09-2010, 03:41 PM
Wonderful trip and very expressive words
Finding yourself is not easy at all and it's not easy to look into a mirror and see your true self Rose,,you did a good job by trying to find it in those lovely words
Sweetie..keep on
http://musformation.com/pics/thank-you.gif
hi lost lady
yes finding yourself is not easy
sometimes It takes years to do that
thank you for your nice words and passing
by
rose rani
16-09-2010, 03:49 PM
I did not understand how can I find myself, what should I do to find myself, there is only one way to can anyone find him/herself, it is by mirror, looking into your mirror it easy to see yourself and find it, but i think if you want to be stronger person and whatever you want to be , you just have to create yourself again with all your experiences. and when you love yourself and love who you are that makes you will savor and enjoy both life's pain and pleasures.
that was my opinion
and
thanks sis for sharing your thought
I'm waiting for your next writing
keep on writing
you can not creat yourself
you can change yourself and improve
thank you for sharing us your opinion
and for your nice passing by
rose rani
16-09-2010, 03:53 PM
I wish I could travel through the time
I will change that moment I make you mine
I will turn those dark days into bright
I will win every single life’s fight
I am counting down the days
For the moment to come take me away
I am waiting for my new life
You have cut me with knife
Every hours and then days without you
Tells I can live weeks and years without you
I feel surprise when you try to hold me tight
I think its dynamite but you call it plight
lovely and amazing lines
they need to be in a new topic
thank you brother for sharing us
with your beautiful lines
thank you for being here
rose rani
16-09-2010, 03:56 PM
Thanks Rose , I liked your way of choosing the words and the rhym . The poem is so deep I just felt like Uh I should do that too and sink deep inside myself :)
Again thank you for sharing this beauty with us.
hi my lovely moon
Iam glad that you like it
and you want to try it
happy to see you here
thank you for lighten
my topic wiht your nice passing by
♥√•كـ ♫ ـانت هـنا㋡
18-09-2010, 03:09 AM
Wonderful lines
I like it and agree with it
We should discover ourselves
to find out what are we
May Allh Bless you
^_^
rose rani
18-09-2010, 05:22 PM
Wonderful lines
I like it and agree with it
We should discover ourselves
to find out what are we
May Allh Bless you
^_^
you too dear lovely sense
thank you for your nice comment and passing by
fofooo
19-09-2010, 08:20 PM
But I am sure that I am coming back
stronger person than before
great words thanks alot rose
rose rani
21-09-2010, 07:02 PM
But I am sure that I am coming back
stronger person than before
great words thanks alot rose
you are most welcome
thank you for yourncie passing by
Mr.Salem
29-09-2010, 03:24 PM
If I wanted to start a journey to discover myself, I sure will get lost on the middle.
Thanks rose rani for such sensitive, well written words. I hope you keep on and please share with us.
rose rani
01-10-2010, 05:04 PM
If I wanted to start a journey to discover myself, I sure will get lost on the middle.
Thanks rose rani for such sensitive, well written words. I hope you keep on and please share with us.
it takes so long time but
you will not get lost
thank you brother for your nice words
and for being here
rose rani
04-10-2010, 06:31 PM
I like It
thanks
you are welcome
I am happy to have u here
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