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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : Iam going away



rose rani
07-09-2010, 01:07 AM
I am going away
To nowhere
To inside me
To collect the shattered pieces of my dreams

To face me face to face without any masks


To discover myself
It is a dark long journey
I may feel lonely
I may feel stranger
I may feel lost

But

This journey must be taken to find out
The peace inside me
To find out the happiness inside me
Because should not we find peace and happiness in ourselves
We can not find them out side with other people

I am going away to find myself
But I am sure that I am coming back
stronger person than before

by rose rani

bigevil
07-09-2010, 01:23 AM
woooow


it's a beautiful

I like it


thanks and show me more of your writing

قلم الرصاص
07-09-2010, 03:32 AM
Mash' Allah

really a beautiful words

Thank you so much

● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆
07-09-2010, 07:52 AM
So expressive and meaningful lines
Keep on writing dear sis

postgraduate
07-09-2010, 04:19 PM
Rose rani
Unlike those stories I have read about traveling I find yours marvelous. You are going away BUT not to anywhere as we might think. Your journey is heading inside of you .A lot of things inside of you such as happiness, peace and inspiration will be then discovered. What a nice trip that one is! When we just do the same thing and start traveling .It is such a beautiful sensation to live those moments. Dear rose I really enjoyed reading .Thanks a lot for giving us these moments to travel inside!

rose rani
08-09-2010, 01:01 AM
woooow


it's a beautiful

I like it


thanks and show me more of your writing


you are most welcome here

I am so glad that you like it

thank you for your beautiful passing by

prettyالسبهه
08-09-2010, 10:48 PM
ROSE RANI
ur journey is so hard as I think
some time figure out the others
is esier than discover our selves

nice wods rose

:lost lady:
08-09-2010, 11:11 PM
Wonderful trip and very expressive words
Finding yourself is not easy at all and it's not easy to look into a mirror and see your true self Rose,,you did a good job by trying to find it in those lovely words
Sweetie..keep on

http://musformation.com/pics/thank-you.gif

rose rani
09-09-2010, 12:08 AM
Mash' Allah

really a beautiful words

Thank you so much



thank you lovely sister for your beautiful passing by

rose rani
09-09-2010, 12:09 AM
So expressive and meaningful lines
Keep on writing dear sis


thank you sunlight for
your nice words and passing by

rose rani
10-09-2010, 04:10 PM
Rose rani
Unlike those stories I have read about traveling I find yours marvelous. You are going away BUT not to anywhere as we might think. Your journey is heading inside of you .A lot of things inside of you such as happiness, peace and inspiration will be then discovered. What a nice trip that one is! When we just do the same thing and start traveling .It is such a beautiful sensation to live those moments. Dear rose I really enjoyed reading .Thanks a lot for giving us these moments to travel inside!


discovering yourself
is so important to help a person
to go through the life

thank you so much post for being here
Iam so glad to see you here
it is always appreciated

rose rani
11-09-2010, 03:02 PM
ROSE RANI
ur journey is so hard as I think
some time figure out the others
is esier than discover our selves

nice wods rose


because we are afraid to find
out who we are
so try to find out otheres

thank you dear sis for your nice comment and
passing by

englishLo0oveR
13-09-2010, 02:15 AM
I did not understand how can I find myself, what should I do to find myself, there is only one way to can anyone find him/herself, it is by mirror, looking into your mirror it easy to see yourself and find it, but i think if you want to be stronger person and whatever you want to be , you just have to create yourself again with all your experiences. and when you love yourself and love who you are that makes you will savor and enjoy both life's pain and pleasures.

that was my opinion
and
thanks sis for sharing your thought

I'm waiting for your next writing

keep on writing

abu ghararah
14-09-2010, 03:44 AM
I wish I could travel through the time
I will change that moment I make you mine
I will turn those dark days into bright
I will win every single life’s fight


I am counting down the days
For the moment to come take me away
I am waiting for my new life
You have cut me with knife

Every hours and then days without you
Tells I can live weeks and years without you
I feel surprise when you try to hold me tight
I think its dynamite but you call it plight

M.o_o.N
14-09-2010, 04:00 AM
Thanks Rose , I liked your way of choosing the words and the rhym . The poem is so deep I just felt like Uh I should do that too and sink deep inside myself :)
Again thank you for sharing this beauty with us.

rose rani
16-09-2010, 03:41 PM
Wonderful trip and very expressive words
Finding yourself is not easy at all and it's not easy to look into a mirror and see your true self Rose,,you did a good job by trying to find it in those lovely words
Sweetie..keep on

http://musformation.com/pics/thank-you.gif


hi lost lady

yes finding yourself is not easy
sometimes It takes years to do that
thank you for your nice words and passing
by

rose rani
16-09-2010, 03:49 PM
I did not understand how can I find myself, what should I do to find myself, there is only one way to can anyone find him/herself, it is by mirror, looking into your mirror it easy to see yourself and find it, but i think if you want to be stronger person and whatever you want to be , you just have to create yourself again with all your experiences. and when you love yourself and love who you are that makes you will savor and enjoy both life's pain and pleasures.

that was my opinion
and
thanks sis for sharing your thought

I'm waiting for your next writing

keep on writing



you can not creat yourself
you can change yourself and improve

thank you for sharing us your opinion
and for your nice passing by

rose rani
16-09-2010, 03:53 PM
I wish I could travel through the time
I will change that moment I make you mine
I will turn those dark days into bright
I will win every single life’s fight


I am counting down the days
For the moment to come take me away
I am waiting for my new life
You have cut me with knife

Every hours and then days without you
Tells I can live weeks and years without you
I feel surprise when you try to hold me tight
I think its dynamite but you call it plight



lovely and amazing lines
they need to be in a new topic
thank you brother for sharing us
with your beautiful lines
thank you for being here

rose rani
16-09-2010, 03:56 PM
Thanks Rose , I liked your way of choosing the words and the rhym . The poem is so deep I just felt like Uh I should do that too and sink deep inside myself :)
Again thank you for sharing this beauty with us.


hi my lovely moon
Iam glad that you like it
and you want to try it
happy to see you here
thank you for lighten
my topic wiht your nice passing by

♥√•كـ ♫ ـانت ‏هـنا㋡
18-09-2010, 03:09 AM
Wonderful lines

I like it and agree with it

We should discover ourselves

to find out what are we

May Allh Bless you

^_^

rose rani
18-09-2010, 05:22 PM
Wonderful lines

I like it and agree with it

We should discover ourselves

to find out what are we

May Allh Bless you

^_^


you too dear lovely sense
thank you for your nice comment and passing by

fofooo
19-09-2010, 08:20 PM
But I am sure that I am coming back
stronger person than before

great words thanks alot rose

rose rani
21-09-2010, 07:02 PM
But I am sure that I am coming back
stronger person than before

great words thanks alot rose




you are most welcome
thank you for yourncie passing by

Mr.Salem
29-09-2010, 03:24 PM
If I wanted to start a journey to discover myself, I sure will get lost on the middle.
Thanks rose rani for such sensitive, well written words. I hope you keep on and please share with us.

rose rani
01-10-2010, 05:04 PM
If I wanted to start a journey to discover myself, I sure will get lost on the middle.
Thanks rose rani for such sensitive, well written words. I hope you keep on and please share with us.


it takes so long time but
you will not get lost

thank you brother for your nice words
and for being here

toly
02-10-2010, 11:30 PM
I like It

thanks

rose rani
04-10-2010, 06:31 PM
I like It

thanks

you are welcome
I am happy to have u here