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[diamond2007]

السلام عليكم ورحمه الله وبركآته ..

آبي منكم مسآعده لآهنتوآ ..

آنآ عندي هوم وورك بمآده اسمها اساسيات الكتآبه ..

وهو اني اكتب مثل البرقراف بسيط من كم جمله
عن حدث مهم صار بحياتي خلال الخمس سنوات الماضيه ..

وهالاسئله موجوده بالكتاب للمسآعده :

what was the event?
who was involved?
when did it occur?
where didi the event occur?
how did you find out about it ? how did it occur?
why was it important to you? why,many years later , would your grandchildren be interested in reading about it?

..

آنآ كتبت ذآ ..

the most event I did not forget was when I graduated . I graduated in last year .
I graduated from secondary school . It was very important to me becouse
I can complate my educatio..

آبي رأيكم لو سمحتوآ واي تعديل او اضآفه ..

عسآكم ع القوة ..

[M.o_o.N]

وعليكم السلام

هلا حبيبتي

ماشاء الله عليك شطورة و تعبيرك حلو ^_^

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The most event I did not forget when I graduated . I graduated last year from secondary school . It was very important to me because now
I can complete my education .

[diamond2007]

thanx honey