المساعد الشخصي الرقمي

مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : The patriot~~ ~~



● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆
02-11-2010, 10:10 PM
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In their old house, Ahmad and his mother spent their last few hours to gather before he joined the army , talking about Ahmad s childhood and his old dream of becoming a soldier

I have to go now, mom " Ahmad said "

Oh ,Can t you stay dear, just for this night? " The mother whispered"
I wish if I can, but I have to join my troops tonight ". Ahmad said
"
With his last word a wave of tears cover her face she could not hide her fears any more she could not bear the idea of not seeing him around

" Please mother don t cry.. I don’t want to see your precious tears, I wanted you to pray for me , mom " .Ahmad said

"I will always pray for you my dear son ,. My Allah bless you and keep you safe " the mother said "
She hold him too close," oh dear I wish if I can hide you inside my heart, I wish if I can stop this stupid war".
His mother is getting so angry now she is squeezing him so hard
,
Why….? ' Why son..? " She was trembling , "
He could not understand what did she mean and before he responded to her questions she
added
Why do Muslims fight each other?" they are Muslims. Aren’t they ? She said
"

"They are not real Muslims mother, they are killing innocent people, they are destroying people s properties and our religion is not like this . it is the religion of pace, love and kindness

And their bad actions put our country in danger , so we have to fight them "
Ahmad said

" May Allah watch you and protect you, you and your friends, my son "the mother tone change, she looked very proud of her son now. She knew that he and his friends will do their

best to keep her and other people safe , so she should let him go.

"Take good care of your country son and I will be here waiting for you." She said

" I will, my mother, and please don’t worry and take good care of yourself" . Ahmad kissed her hand and left

She watched him leaving, and her eyes followed him, she stand there for a long time before

she noticed that he was gone


To our brave soldiers ; thank you

Lolita 1
03-11-2010, 03:03 AM
WOW

The title of this story is attractive

really , this story is full of wisdom and victim for home

thank u of the size of sky

ACCEPT MY PASSING BY

Mr.Salem
03-11-2010, 09:56 AM
very touchy , and well written stroy.
Thanks a lot for sharing this wonderful story.

● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆
03-11-2010, 04:16 PM
WOW

The title of this story is attractive

really , this story is full of wisdom and victim for home

thank u of the size of sky

ACCEPT MY PASSING BY




لوليتا انجلش
thank you my dear for your lovely words and I am so glad that you like it

● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆
04-11-2010, 02:15 PM
very touchy , and well written stroy.
Thanks a lot for sharing this wonderful story.


alanazi

you are welcome my bro> and thank you for your comments
they really make feel good about my story

Brave heART1
05-11-2010, 04:01 PM
Thanks for your post.



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● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆
06-11-2010, 06:22 PM
alanazi

you are welcome my bro> and thank you for your comments
they re~~~ really make me feel good about my story


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thank you

● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆
06-11-2010, 06:24 PM
Thanks for your post.



:smile (40):


Brave heART1

you are most welcome

ACME
08-11-2010, 03:37 PM
To our brave soldiers ; thank you


And to our sunlight , I say thanks very much for that splendid story . As I was reading it , I could feel the mother's trembling hands and whispering low voice to convince her son not to go
I lived every moment of their dialogue waiting anxiously for the end . In fact , you have a lovely way of grasping the reader's attention to the end . Keep moving ahead.

rose rani
08-11-2010, 09:12 PM
wonderful

May Allah bless every solider who
defends his country
from any enemy
thank you dear sun for sharing us

● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆
12-11-2010, 12:13 AM
And to our sunlight , I say thanks very much for that splendid story . As I was reading it , I could feel the mother's trembling hands and whispering low voice to convince her son not to go
I lived every moment of their dialogue waiting anxiously for the end . In fact , you have a lovely way of grasping the reader's attention to the end . Keep moving ahead.


sirhasan

Thank you sir for your support and for your encouraging words .I will always do my best to be a good writer.

● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆
12-11-2010, 05:21 PM
wonderful

May Allah bless every solider who
defends his country
from any enemy
thank you dear sun for sharing us


rose rani

you are most welcme dear sis

monalife
13-11-2010, 01:05 AM
great story
go ahead
:smile2 (1):

إجتماعي
13-11-2010, 01:50 AM
Wonderful fantasy in writing
Thanks for sharing