A new Day Has Come

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

A new day has come



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The darkness of the night
retreated in silence

When the heart of
a new day starts to beat

The sun spreads joy over
the sleeping mountains
Birds are dancing and singing in
sweet harmony
Announcing the birth
of a new day


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Winds are breathing so gently
I can hear their soft whispers
waking up the old trees

Children's laughter is bringing life
again to the abandoned streets

Anew day has come


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BY: ṡύɳ♥lϊɠɦṫ

[madgirl]

It's really amazing
Thanks 4 ur hands

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

It's really amazing
Thanks 4 ur hands


madgirl

you are most welcome my dear and thank you for your nice comments

[ael2424]

Wonderful

Thanks dear

[إجتماعي]

I can see a light and feel an optimism among your lines
Thanks a lot for sharing us
Waiting more from you

[monalife]

I had been touched of a poet sense in your words

Very shine words.

[b7ar]

good job
I found it useful

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

Wonderful

Thanks dear




ael2424

you are most welcome my dear

[Miss-Thought]

great imagery. thanks for sharing

[الواثقة بالله]

brilliant poem

thanks alot

[daffoodil]

Sun has woken up once more

and brought us the light along as if it proves

that there will be no pain, no darkness

in a world where you can see the sun and its brightness

so be thankful and draw on a smile

a new day, a new hope has come out of the gloominess



You Are My Inspiration :smile (35):


Regards

[ميرنا]

nice topic

thanks alot

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

I can see a light and feel an optimism among your lines
Thanks a lot for sharing us
Waiting more from you


إجتماعي

you are welcome and thank you for your support

[شوق الجوف]

thanks......................

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

I had been touched of a poet sense in your words

Very shine words.


monalife

thank you for your nice comments:girl face (192):

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

good job
I found it useful


b7ar

thank you

[DR AHLAIN]

Winds are breathing so gently
I can hear their soft whispers
waking up the old trees



CLAP

CLAP

CLAP



Great Feelings


What an amazing picture you draw, as if you have an artist brush and you do a paint in front of us

You have a wide immagination TABAK ALLAH

I said that before you are a POET


KEEP ON SISTER


Thank you for sharing us this

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

great imagery. thanks for sharing


Miss-Thought

you are most welcome dear

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

brilliant poem

thanks alot


الواثقة بالله

thank you dear for your lovely comments and for being here

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

Sun has woken up once more

and brought us the light along as if it proves

that there will be no pain, no darkness

in a world where you can see the sun and its brightness

so be thankful and draw on a smile

a new day, a new hope has come out of the gloominess



You Are My Inspiration :smile (35):



Regards


daffoodil

thank you dear for every word you wrote here
it means alot to me


:small (267):

[سونة30]

thanks I really miss sweet words
Thanks again

[Miss koka]

~~thank you

[banani]

السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته
thank you

[hot-meme=girl]

Thanx so much sweety
:girl face (198):
ur poem gives a hope of a new brightful day

i liked it so much coz it made me fly with the natural images
:smalll (35):



:smile (8):

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

nice topic

thanks alot


ميرنا

you are most welcome dear

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

thanks......................


شوق الجوف

you are welcome

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

Winds are breathing so gently
I can hear their soft whispers
waking up the old trees



CLAP

CLAP

CLAP



Great Feelings


What an amazing picture you draw, as if you have an artist brush and you do a paint in front of us

You have a wide immagination TABAK ALLAH

I said that before you are a POET


KEEP ON SISTER


Thank you for sharing us this




DR AHLAIN

I dont know what to say coz every word you wrote here was like a big prize for me
thank you for being here and for your support

[Mr.Salem]

Sunlight ....
I have an idea. These words need to be recorded in a CD and given to a coffee shop to be played in the morning, Because I felt while reading these words that I was sitting in a very nice coffee shop " Dounken Donates" drinking my black cofee " low sugar ,, reading the news paper and It's raining out side" hhhhhhhh


Thanks a lot , please share with us whatever you write ,, you are my favorate aouther.

[:lost lady:]

what a lovely poem indeed
full of hope and optimism
strong images and strong language
Mash' Allah a fertile imagination and your descriptions bring the reader into the moment,.
You did something truly remarkable
These particular lines grabbed my attention

Winds are breathing so gently
I can hear their soft whispers
waking up the old trees
Children's laughter is bringing life
again to the abandoned streets

Rated with 1000,000 STARS
I'm looking forward to reading more and more sweetie


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[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

thanks I really miss sweet words
Thanks again


سونة30;1206194

you are most welcome dear

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

~~thank you


Miss koka

you are most welcome

[motyri]

as allways sunlight steels the lights of all of us and rocking this site up side down

i enjoy your threads

so keep it coming my supervisor

[ACME]

The images and choice of words are wonderful
Full of optimism and high spirits
Keep it up . I liked it


I have one small comment about the struture
of the first sentence . There is no need for the
verb to be ( is ) because it is in the active form

The darkness of the night is
retreated in silence

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته
thank you


banani

you are welcome dear

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

Thanx so much sweety
:girl face (198):
ur poem gives a hope of a new brightful day

i liked it so much coz it made me fly with the natural images
:smalll (35):



:smile (8):


meme=girl

I am so glad that my poem was able to give you this kind of feeling
thank you dear for being here

[سعودي 03]

ThanK ṡύɳ♥lϊɠɦṫ

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

Sunlight ....
I have an idea. These words need to be recorded in a CD and given to a coffee shop to be played in the morning, Because I felt while reading these words that I was sitting in a very nice coffee shop " Dounken Donates" drinking my black cofee " low sugar ,, reading the news paper and It's raining out side" hhhhhhhh


Thanks a lot , please share with us whatever you write ,, you are my favorate aouther.


alanazi

you are welcome bro and thank you for your lovely comments
May Allah bless you

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

what a lovely poem indeed


full of hope and optimism
strong images and strong language
Mash' Allah a fertile imagination and your descriptions bring the reader into the moment,.
You did something truly remarkable
These particular lines grabbed my attention


Winds are breathing so gently
I can hear their soft whispers
waking up the old trees
Children's laughter is bringing life
again to the abandoned streets


Rated with 1000,000 STARS
I'm looking forward to reading more and more sweetie



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lost lady

I miss you sooo much
thank you for being here dear

[smack]

Amazing
Thanks