~~When it is too late to say sorry ~~

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

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The scene was taken place in
A small beautiful home on an old town) )

Sara was so young to know the meaning of the word death, the feeling of losing some one so special, her eyes were following her mother moves, and she could not understand the way her mother acting today. She looked very sad, tired and her eyes were full of tears Sara was about 7 years old, and she was the only child of Nora and Sami
Mom, why are you crying, are you sick?. Sara said in a low voice
Oh no honey I am not sick. Nora said while her eyes were staring at the door
Oh if I could see you for just one more time, her words were so loud, she could not hold her tears any more
Sara ran to her mother and holds her so close "moms please don’t cry everything is going to be ok." She tried to wipe her mother's tears with her little fingers but her tears were like a wild river, it refused to stop

Mom, please, stop, "Sara start to cry, too
hush, now baby I am really sorry " Nora isTrying "
To comfort her child now
What is wrong mom, why are you crying" Sara said with"
Her crying voice"
While they were talking Sami entered the room, his eyes were searching for his most precious women in his life
He could notice the sadness in their eyes, tears were covering their faces
Sara was the first to notice her father presences
"Daddy," she ran to him
"How are you dear, are you ok" Sami leans over, kiss her forehead"
I am ok. But mommy", she was crying all the day"
It is ok, honey ; she is not feeling very well today. His eyes were watching his wife sadness; he turned his eyes now to his daughter and said
"Sara honey could you bring a glass of water to your mother please"
"Ok, but please, make her stop crying" then she ran to the kitchen
Sara, are you ok?"
Sami asked
"
She raised her eyes to meet his eyes," No I am not ok
He was my father Sami, he was there for me all my life but I was not there for him when he was needed me most"
How can I live with myself, I was so selfish to let him die before telling him how much I loved him
Oh Sami if I can hold him for one more time" I will never let him die before telling him how sorry I am for not being a good daughter"
Sami "hush now, I am sure he knew how much you loved him even if you did not say it in words"
"Oh , dear , sorry seems to be now an easy word to be said but it is too late now is not , oh dad , I will pray for you , please forgive me god " Sara said her last words and start crying

The End
written by

ṡύɳ♥lϊɠɦṫ

[Mr.Salem]

First of all, I am not going to talk about the moral or the wisdom of this “Story “. Believe me, this is not just a piece of writing or telling a story no, not at all. This is ” a Well -Directed Scene” from Hollywood . I felt that I was watching one of my favorite drama films, but only this time the move gives a real story.
Sunlight, you really had me there, I have to admit that I teard up little bit while reading the story , because I was in this scene one day.

God bless you and thank you for sharing with us something real.

[glitermoon]

very intersting story
u've written it in a very high dramatical way
It's my first time to enter English Club
and I really enjoy reading your short story
HOPE YOU GOOD DAY

[rose rani]

lovely story
amazing writing

thank you lovely dear for sharing us

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

First of all, I am not going to talk about the moral or the wisdom of this “Story “. Believe me, this is not just a piece of writing or telling a story no, not at all. This is ” a Well -Directed Scene” from Hollywood . I felt that I was watching one of my favorite drama films, but only this time the move gives a real story.
Sunlight, you really had me there, I have to admit that I teard up little bit while reading the story , because I was in this scene one day.

God bless you and thank you for sharing with us something real.


alanazi

your comments my bro make me sooooooo happy
I really appreciate your support so thank you

[Miss-Thought]

WoW!!!!!!!!!!l
u r really Sunlight!!!!!!! I like it ....u will bcome an amazing writer...
keep practicing hun..... u will bcome famous... I KNOW IT!!!!!!!l
LUV YA!
Keep Smiling
.
.

[Mr.X]

dramatical scenes & different emotions happend in short period

make it a story ....


Thats Writing



Thanks ṡύɳ♥lϊɠɦṫ 4 sharing us your creativity


May Allah Bless U

[إجتماعي]

MASH ALLAH

I am proud of my self you know why? cause I am a part of this club
And this club has great writers like you
Thanks for sharing us … waiting more
Best Wishes

[monalife]

very nice story

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

very intersting story
u've written it in a very high dramatical way
It's my first time to enter English Club
and I really enjoy reading your short story
HOPE YOU GOOD DAY


glitermoon

thank you for being here and for your lovely comments

[الواثقة بالله]

I like your way of writing this story
thanks my dear
you're very creative
Masha`Allah

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

lovely story
amazing writing

thank you lovely dear for sharing us


rose rani

you are most welcome my dear sis
and thank you for your support

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

WoW!!!!!!!!!!l
u r really Sunlight!!!!!!! I like it ....u will bcome an amazing writer...
keep practicing hun..... u will bcome famous... I KNOW IT!!!!!!!l
LUV YA!
Keep Smiling
.
.


Miss-Thought

thank you dear for your lovely words they make me so happy

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

dramatical scenes & different emotions happend in short period

make it a story ....


Thats Writing



Thanks ṡύɳ♥lϊɠɦṫ 4 sharing us your creativity


May Allah Bless U


Mr.X;

you are most welcome and thank you for being here

your lovely comments make me so happy

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

MASH ALLAH

I am proud of my self you know why? cause I am a part of this club
And this club has great writers like you
Thanks for sharing us … waiting more
Best Wishes


إجتماعي

words can not thank you enough for your lovely comments
May Allah bless you and guide you ]


:smile (75):

[hot-meme=girl]

OoOoh what amazing dramatical scene

i really lived it an' interacted with it till my tears dropped softly from my eyes
:smile (16):
soOoOo creative
hope fore more an' best
:smile (8):

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

very nice story


monalife
thank you my dear sis for being here
:girl face (192):

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

I like your way of writing this story
thanks my dear
you're very creative
Masha`Allah


الواثقة بالله

you are most welcome and thank you my dear sis for your lovely comments

[فـيصـل]

I swear by God what i'm going to wirte about your story is not kind of flattering at all. what you've done my sister sth like an expert writer show us one of his writings seriously . The narrating is totally attrcative and language as well. Wallah i wish all the best for you my sister in the future



please please please don't ignore your talent in writing

[smack]

Actually perfect and influent:smile (97):
Really thanks :smile (40):
May Allah bless and protect you:small:
Sincerely smack:smile (98):

[drmozh]

wow

this was great !!

I really like it

Masha Allah

may Allah bless you ^^

keep it up

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

OoOoh what amazing dramatical scene

i really lived it an' interacted with it till my tears dropped softly from my eyes
:smile (16):
soOoOo creative
hope fore more an' best
:smile (8):


meme=girl

I am so glad that you like it. and thank you for your lovely comments
:girl face (192):

[G L O R Y]

May Allah Keeps You Safe
Our Teacher SunLight
The Title Really Attracted Me
And Thank God It Did
Cause What You've Wrote Here .. Is Truly A Marvel
Made Me Feel Like .. Am In A Great Drama Play
So Convincing .. So Touching
Anxious To Read More Of You Writing Our Dear
Very Glade To Be Here
God Be With You All Times

[Endless Hope]

Sad Story :(

May Allah bless our parents

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

I swear by God what i'm going to wirte about your story is not kind of flattering at all. what you've done my sister sth like an expert writer show us one of his writings seriously . The narrating is totally attrcative and language as well. Wallah i wish all the best for you my sister in the future



please please please don't ignore your talent in writing





فـيصـل
I am so happy to have you here brother coz your comments make me feel that I did someting good so thank you

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

Actually perfect and influent:smile (97):
Really thanks :smile (40):
May Allah bless and protect you:small:
Sincerely smack:smile (98):


smack

thank you for being here
:girl face (192):

Sincerely sun light: ():


:smile (98):

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

wow

this was great !!

I really like it

Masha Allah

may Allah bless you ^^

keep it up


drmozh

thank you dear for your lovely comments

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

May Allah Keeps You Safe
Our Teacher SunLight
The Title Really Attracted Me
And Thank God It Did
Cause What You've Wrote Here .. Is Truly A Marvel
Made Me Feel Like .. Am In A Great Drama Play
So Convincing .. So Touching
Anxious To Read More Of You Writing Our Dear
Very Glade To Be Here
God Be With You All Times


G L O R Y
thank you for your nice comments they make me so happy
May Allah bless you all the time

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

Sad Story :(

May Allah bless our parents


Endless Hope

Amen

thank you for being here

[سعودي 03]

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It is not good artical











It is the best

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

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It is not good artical











It is the best


سعودي 3.

thank you for your compliments
and for being here