مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : In Dreams
Drifter
10-01-2011, 07:47 PM
Peace upon you all, good people of this Forum
I'm a new member here..
and I'd love to share this with you
its a poem I wrote back in 2007 when things were kinda messy and life wasn't all too kind to me
its kinda blue as you'll notice
anyways
her we go
http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_v07ks6MF9dE/SU6alEWlzcI/AAAAAAAAABw/x1to1rIYuDo/S660/moonlight+through+window.jpg
Beneath the window
On a small bed
In a darkened room
Laid a kid
Staring at the glowing moon
Thinking
Of what might he be
In a future
He can not now see
With a smile
He rolled in his bed and faced the wall
Dreaming
Though he might be so young and small
Of better days
In a better place
Full of hopes
Full of dreams
He closed his eyes
And he slept in peace
.
.
.
:smile (75):
Plz,
share your thoughts
prettyالسبهه
10-01-2011, 11:25 PM
woooo00000ooow
really its nice
short and have meaning
O drifter u look active member
am waiting for ur topice , funny character and even fighting
yup do not be shy all of them here fighting each other
sya
آنسهOoفكره
11-01-2011, 06:45 PM
Dreams . Dreams
are every one
normal right..
.
Wonderful
Drifter
..
You have A vivid way of writing
I can picture your words..
Very touchy..
Keep it up
welcome
&
To ur club..
إجتماعي
11-01-2011, 08:55 PM
First of all
Welcome a million here in Saudi English forum
Second not only the words that you wrote is great also the picture you posted is so great and complete the moral of your poem
Thanks a lot for sharing
Keep it up
Drifter
16-01-2011, 01:32 AM
woooo00000ooow
really its nice
short and have meaning
O drifter u look active member
am waiting for ur topice , funny character and even fighting
yup do not be shy all of them here fighting each other
sya
Your kind words fill me with joy, princess
much gratitude for your presence
Drifter
16-01-2011, 01:35 AM
Dreams . Dreams
are every one
normal right..
.
Wonderful
Drifter
..
You have A vivid way of writing
I can picture your words..
Very touchy..
Keep it up
welcome
&
To ur club..
I'm glad you liked it
and am very excited to be here
Your presence is much appreciated
Thank you
Drifter
16-01-2011, 01:36 AM
First of all
Welcome a million here in Saudi English forum
Second not only the words that you wrote is great also the picture you posted is so great and complete the moral of your poem
Thanks a lot for sharing
Keep it up
I appreciate your presence, brotha
thank you for your kind words
rose rani
16-01-2011, 05:18 PM
welcome to the English club
your way of writing is so smooth
keep up
» αиgεl•
16-01-2011, 09:37 PM
your writing way is great
go ahead
bananajuice
16-01-2011, 11:26 PM
great poem >.. keep on sweety >>>>>>>>>> and u had just remind me of my self when i i was a little girl dreaming and hoping .......... nice pic too .... thank u for these words ..
hot-meme=girl
23-01-2011, 01:06 PM
Welcome here bro an' hope u r enjoying ur times here
really nice an soft poem
thanx alot
Drifter
23-01-2011, 05:59 PM
welcome to the English club
your way of writing is so smooth
keep up
Your kindness soothes the soul, Rani
I thank you for that
Drifter
23-01-2011, 06:00 PM
your writing way is great
go ahead
Spoken like a true angel :P
Gracias
Drifter
23-01-2011, 06:02 PM
great poem >.. keep on sweety >>>>>>>>>> and u had just remind me of my self when i i was a little girl dreaming and hoping .......... nice pic too .... thank u for these words
Thank you for the "sweet" words sweety :D
and I urge you to never stop dreaming
Drifter
23-01-2011, 06:05 PM
Welcome here bro an' hope u r enjoying ur times here
really nice an soft poem
thanx alot
I thank you for your kind words and welcoming
Hot-meme
hehehehe..
ur name is awesome
so ecchi
lol
:P
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