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19-01-2011, 03:51 AM
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My love
My love how many times I want to said to you without any shyness because the life without you don’t equal any things
You the sun in the daytime and the moon if the sun erase on my night
And how much time I hope to see you in my dreams and the marvelous things to be my queen in my dreams
Continuous days and years without meet you but you my heart that beating in your air I hope if I see you for seconds because your see you its a big dreams that never implement just in the drams.
:smile (84):I wrote this poem and I have many mistakes
Plz correct to me
And tell me your comments for my first poem
hahahahaahahahahahahah:small:
My love
My love how many times I want to said to you without any shyness because the life without you don’t equal any things
You the sun in the daytime and the moon if the sun erase on my night
And how much time I hope to see you in my dreams and the marvelous things to be my queen in my dreams
Continuous days and years without meet you but you my heart that beating in your air I hope if I see you for seconds because your see you its a big dreams that never implement just in the drams.
:smile (84):I wrote this poem and I have many mistakes
Plz correct to me
And tell me your comments for my first poem
hahahahaahahahahahahah:small: