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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : tonight i am not alone



محمدالمعشني
03-02-2011, 09:20 PM
hey guys,, this is my poem ,,read and comment plz..

am doing my best against the fire,,

which burns my heart,,
and falls me apart ,,

i can not tolerate this position,
and i can not take a decision,.
due to my bad condition,,

its unbelievable that you would rat me,,
you have become a person whom i wish not to be,,
enough playing with me,,

today i have on friends but i will have later or soon,,

and that not means i am alone,,
because tonight i will stand by the moon,,
yes,, tonight i am not alone.


**my regards **

LO butterfly LO
04-02-2011, 03:41 PM
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nice poeme and very good writing
write more and more

rose rani
04-02-2011, 06:49 PM
I love it
I like the rhyme
keep up the good work

thank you so much for sharing

hot-meme=girl
05-02-2011, 02:43 AM
yop really nice an' good
keep writing an' we're waiting for more
Thanx bro

May God bless u