اكره الانجلش
04-07-2011, 03:57 AM
السـلام علييكم
الله يسعدكم جميع ابي مسساعدة وهي:
تساعدوني بتصحيح الاخطاء في قصة..
in the sun day morning
i was get up ... and i didn,t see my friend in the work
like every day
and all people was look like not usually so i start bee fraid
are there somthing is happin to the word and didn,t happining to me ??
because not just my frined but there is alot of people desabear
so i get inside the net sudnlley i feel fraid and i see a three people get inside my house
said that word a three time
you the one ... you the one ... you the one
they break my body after that
but i didn,t feel any thing
just my body start look like a monestr
and there are thirteen bone broke inside me !
and i walk evening with all that
they was looked like ghost so i start
belived a ghost
after that i see a black hole
i get inside it >>
i see my self suddnley
wake up and it was a just bad dream
and wash my face and back to my company
انتظرررررركم ع احر من الجمرر
الله يسعدكم جميع ابي مسساعدة وهي:
تساعدوني بتصحيح الاخطاء في قصة..
in the sun day morning
i was get up ... and i didn,t see my friend in the work
like every day
and all people was look like not usually so i start bee fraid
are there somthing is happin to the word and didn,t happining to me ??
because not just my frined but there is alot of people desabear
so i get inside the net sudnlley i feel fraid and i see a three people get inside my house
said that word a three time
you the one ... you the one ... you the one
they break my body after that
but i didn,t feel any thing
just my body start look like a monestr
and there are thirteen bone broke inside me !
and i walk evening with all that
they was looked like ghost so i start
belived a ghost
after that i see a black hole
i get inside it >>
i see my self suddnley
wake up and it was a just bad dream
and wash my face and back to my company
انتظرررررركم ع احر من الجمرر