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smack
31-07-2011, 01:38 AM
Some of people


Some people need all the thing for taking with it does not need
And some people accept anything that is frequently in need.,
Some of people give and forgot what they give and another people take and
forgot what they take.
Some people give and regret and they think that give us too mach things
The people who say this time give and take, you made this time just take.
The person who needs something's from you seems angel man, and when he sucks your blood changed to volcano destruction.

Maybe have many mistake plz correct to me
:smile (28):

rose rani
31-07-2011, 05:20 PM
meaningful lines
I will correct the ideas which are clear to me

some people take everything however,
they are not in need

while some accept anything eventhough they are in need

some people give and forget
others take and forget
some people give and regret because they think they give too many things

rose rani
31-07-2011, 05:21 PM
but Iam sorry the idea of the second pary is not clear for me

I could not understand

sorry



thank you for sharing us

smack
01-08-2011, 12:04 AM
Thanks a lot for you
and I appreciate your effort
Thanks again

miss foz
02-08-2011, 05:52 AM
Thank you for wonderful words

smack
03-08-2011, 12:49 AM
you are welcome