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smack
31-07-2011, 11:06 AM
Thousand night and night

The night and his sky, his stars and moon, moon and woken, you and me, you my love and together together in the love together and the love, oh my god from the love, woken up the love, and we said to love my love come to live in the night eyes and said to sun come here, the sun come here after one year, not before one year .this love this marvelous love night, In the thousand night and night, in the thousand night and night, in the thousand night and night. This night included all the life, what the meaning of the life without this night.

Plz correct to me :smile (68):

newbie teacher
05-08-2011, 05:37 AM
Hello there ,Smack !
I think your sentences above need many proof- reading.I assume that you had translated these sentences from Arabic through al wafi.I'm sure you can do better by yourself ! Try to come up with other sentences and I would be more than glad to peruse them .