مسآعدة my Room

السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته
كتبت براقراف واحس كل ابوه غلط ممكن اذا ماعليكم أمر تشوفونه وتصلحون لي الأخطآء اللي فيه :$
المطلوب كتابة براقرفا عن غرفتي

My Smal World

everyone has favorite place . I love spending a lot of time in it because it makes me comfortable . .first of all , I have a small bed , but it is comfortable . Next t my bed , there is a closet . Where I store y pants, shirts,coats and much more. thre is also a box that has trash bags,hangers,and a few other thing. on the walls, there are framed pictures hanged and big mirror . a very important thing in my room is my studing desk . below that , there is a shelf where I have a private library . My library consist of diffrent kind of magazines , photo albums , dictionaries , and a few stories. Also , I have an alarm clock on the disk . I consider the alarm clock as an mportant thing because it wake me up in the morning . Finally , I love my room , and it is my favorites place where I feel free

ضروري ابيه الييييوم :(
لاتبخلون علي والله يوفقكم

وعليكم السلام ورحمة الله تعالى وبركاته..

حياك أختي الغالية عبق الزهوور

تعبيرك جيد ولم ينقصة سوى أخطاء إملائية بسيطة..

عدلت لك الموضوع ..وإذا كان هنالك أخطاء أخرى ..فأعذريني لأني لم ألاحظها..






My Small World

Everyone has a favorite place . I love spending a lot of time in it because it makes me feel comfortable . .First of all , I have a small bed , but it is comfortable . Next to my bed , there is a closet . Where I store my pants, shirts, coats and much more. There is also a box that has trash bags, hangers and a few other thing. On the walls, there are framed pictures hanged and big mirror . A very important thing in my room is my studying desk Under that , there is a shelf where I keep my private library . My library consist of different kind of magazines , photo albums , dictionaries and a few stories. Also , I have an alarm clock on the disk . I consider the alarm clock as an important thing because it wakes me up in the morning . Finally , I love my room , and it is my favorites place where I feel free

جولي الله يعطيك ألف عافيه :$
جزاك الله خير والله يجعلها بميزان حسناتك
مشكوره ياقلبي كفيتي ووفيتي ق1

http://www.saudienglish.net/vb/showpost.php?p=763582&postcount=16

شوفي الرابط :)


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