the past

hey everyone
i wrote somethig before and
i hope you like it
(if there any any mistakes please tell me)

when you look at your self in the mirrorthan you reember the life and what she did it to you from the pain. when the pain wanted to leave he gave you gift not normal gif it's the hurt
whan you look to the other sideyou feel so happy because you were fighting with much and much of brave.

Oh, honey !

what you wrote was very great and had warm senses

but as your comment ,, I'll try to guide you to your mistakes in my point of view

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة little angel 14

when you look at your self in the mirrorthan you reember the life and what she did it to you from the pain.

when the pain wanted to leave he gave you gift not normal gif it's the hurt

whan you look to the other side you feel so happy because you were fighting with much and much of brave.

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when you look to yourself in the mirror, you remember the life and what it did to you from the pain. ( what it learnt you from the pain ) maybe it's better


when you look to yourself in the mirror that it remind you with the life and what it learnt you from the pain

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when you look to your self in the mirror whenever it remind you with the life and what it learnt you from the pain


when the pain wanted to leave you, it gave you a gift which is not normal .. it's the hurt


when you look to the other side, you feel so happy because you were fighting with much and
much of brave

Keep the good work up ,honey!

May Allah bless you ..

and we are proud of you

with BEST wishes and have a bright future

your sister,

Palestinian Pearl

thank you so much for help
and thank you so much for everything

Nice writing, and it might be true


Our sister Palestanian Pearl did a great job


Thanks for sharing such feeling with us


Bless you

thanks for visiting my tobic
i wrote it becausre i know you care about my writing

Good luck

little angel

Well done

thank you so much

It is nice
thanks

thank you a lot

Your Highness

So beautiful dear little angel 14
and thanx for our sister's ( Palestinian Pearl ) added

we are so happy to have you both among us

be always flying you butterflies in this Club


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Try

It's not me who did a great job

It's my lovely sister little angel , indeed

;) Thanks sweetie again and we wait your creative writings

with my love,

your sister

Thanx our little angel
keep going and trying
perfectness comes by practicing

thank you so much
sister:little angel 14