my poem about Gaza

salam dear brothers and sister.
here is my poem about Gaza that i've written a couple of years ago .i hope u will like it
As the dark night comes to Gaza

The tragedies come with.

The little baby cries in darkness

Until he can't breathe

He cannot sleep a wink

cuz no milk is left to drink.

There's no food, there's no bread

But there's pain in their stead

So, the poor mum can do nothing

But only her warm tears to shed

Weeping so much while asking:

What's up with this crazy world?

Why do others keep so silent?

Why cannot they say a word?

Are they so mute and deaf…
That my cries cannot be heard?

Is it my fate to be jailed…

In a cage just like a bird. ?

Who can say: "”No for the siege!"

Tell me who can really dare?

Who can give my kids some food?

Who can show them love and care?

oh
that is great
i like me your poem
thank you
i hope than she see this it

Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiice

Very nice poem


Alah bless you
Keep going

thank you all for your comments .Allah bless you all

It is really meaningful poem speaks about our people there
no can read it whithout feeling shame because we can not do nothing for him

May Allah help them to comeover this bad situation

and forgive us

thank you so much for sharing

oooh sweet words bro it's truelly toched
it's really full of pain and suffer
i liked ur description, as u descriped Gaza as a cage and the people in it as birdz
thanx bro 4 sharing & keep on
MAY ALLAH BLESS U+

Thank you........

How sweet of you to dedicate those words for brothers in Gaza

Bless you

I realy enjoy reading it

very nice words

thanks

^_^