Expalining the poem

I want to thank my brothers and sisters for their encouraging comments they passed on the poem I posted a couple of weeks ago. Any I want to just tell you that the poem is not about love of a woman. The poem is about life dunia and how some people think that it won’t drive them away from thinking of and working for the hereafter. So I wrote the poem as if it was a love poem.

Here is the poem again:

I thought my heart was fortified.
So it won’t yield for a look from your eyes.
Yet, oh wicked witch,
You kept casting your spells kiss after kiss.
Until my heart submitted to your every wish.
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I thought my heart was fortified.
So it won’t yield for a look from your eyes.
Yet, oh wicked witch,
You kept casting your spells kiss after kiss.
Until my heart submitted to your every wish

thnx my brother for ur nice poem

life is as important as love, therefore we should consider it even in poetry


keep on plz

.I got it
Thanks

Thanks again The Seeker

You make us happy with ur duplicate topic

we've got your message

Thanks bro

thanks for the comments brothers and sisters

Now.....i Got It .....thanks