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I*******A Love Story By Sirhasan******I
A Sad Love Story
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She and I had been together for a long time , but something that none of us knew made us apart . I did not see her for a whole week and I really began to go mad . She disappeared Suddenly . I asked about
her everywhere but got no clue .I phoned her mobile hundreds of times but she did not reply .
This went on for a month . A complete month of agony and despair .
During this month my whole life deteriorated . Things changed from bad to worse . My life became very gloomy. The days were depressing and the nights were fearful nightmares . I really was afraid of losing her .
I was not ready to forgo the only thing that made life bearable and worth living . Thus ,
I kept aloof from my friends and relatives .I turned into a lonesome man who kept himself to himself
I did not mixed with my friends . I rarely go out of my home . I just spent hours and hours with
her pictures talking to them . The more I remember our intimate times together , the more I cry .I cry and cry and cry .Finally , I collapsed and then knew nothing . The next morning I wake up very tired and another depressing day begins .
My friends began to feel anxious for me . They tried their best to take me out of this . Whenever they went to a café , a restaurant or a park , they take me with them .They tried to amuse me and made me laugh but I was dying from inside . They did all this to help me get over my love problem .
After three months , I gathered up my courage and tried to lead the normal life that everybody enjoyed
I pretended that I did not care anymore but I did . I pretended that I forgot her but I did not .Something in my heart still reminded me of her . I pretended and pretended but nothing was true .
Then one day , the truth came out .It was Thursday , and I Will never forget it as long as I lived .As I
entered the nearest shopping mall , I bumped into someone who was carrying a plastic bags full of items . May I was day dreaming of her , who knows .I felt embarrassed and began to clear the mess
I made . I began to collect the items from the floor . As I raised my eyes to say sorry , I saw her for the first time .I stood still . I did not believe my eyes . Was it real ? Was it a dream that came true ?
Here she is , as beautiful as she always was .Her lovely face and glimmering eyes that once captivated me .I was greeted with a huge smile . My feelings were a mixture of fear , astonishment , disbelief and happiness . The moment I saw tears falling from her eyes , my legs gave way and I fell to the ground .
I stretched both my arms and cried like a baby and said " Hello , My Love "
The End
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I hope You like it – My regards to all .
Note :
This story raises many questions which I preferred not to answer
I Kept the story open – ended to your imagination to fly high and complete it
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WOOOW
VERY WONDERFULL STORY
thanks
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you have a nice way
in writing story
you keep the reader continue
untill he or she finishes the stroy
thank you for sharing us
we are waiting for your new topics
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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة dimples
wooow
very wonderfull story
thanks
dimples
many thanks to you for passing and commenting nicely
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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة rose rani
you have a nice way
in writing story
you keep the reader continue
untill he or she finishes the stroy
thank you for sharing us
we are waiting for your new topics
I thank you deeply for your nice words
May Allah bless you
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Thats a sad LOVE story
You break our hearts by telling us this one >>no TEARS loolz
Sirhasan
Masha ' Allah
Very talented person
keep it up please
May Allah keep You a way from sadness
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lost lady
Thanks for nice words
May Allah bless You
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sirhasan
What a lovely story you wrote which is full of feelings
I was imagining it as it happened in front of me
I prefer not to complete it because it has a suitable end
Well done brother and keep going
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it touches my heart and I hope you have bright future in writing stories
Thank u
Dear
sirhasan
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thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanks alot
you are very Gifted
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Sea breeze
Nanosh
Asoma
Many thanks for your passing
And commenting so nicely
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I hope other members like it
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it's a great story bother thanks soo much
ok I wish if i can end it with a happy end but because of your topic is " A sad love story"
so I'll end it with a very sad end if you don't mind
don't be depressed all loooooooool
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After a while we sat together and I asked her a rain of questions...where were you, what happened, why did you answer my messages and calls…but she stopped me and said with dropping tears and said: stop it everything has finished between us we won't be together any more" what..? I replied….she stayed silent looking down>>>I continued...ba ba but why? What happened...why are you saying that? I asked…because I got married…she replied…yes he is a rich man who my father likes and there is no chance that we would be together again…she said…before finishing her speech I lost my consciousness ..Finally after that moment I didn't see her ever trying to forget everything but how, can anyone help me please?
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Dear Pink Pen
What a great writer you are . Masha Allah You have prolific imagination
I liked your way of writing so much . Please keep on writing and read a lot
You are and will be a distiguished writer indeed , so carry on
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very nice story
I like it
thanks alot
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I hope others find it touching too
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I like ur writings
U r gifted
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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة BRIGHTFUL STAR
I like ur writings
U r gifted
Thanks So Much For Your Compliment Dear
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You are endowed writer , poet and what else?
Masha Allah keep up the good work .
Have a blessed day.
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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Renoa
You are endowed writer , poem and what else?
Masha Allah keep up the good work .
Have a blessed day.
Dear Renoa , Many Thanks To U 4 UR Generous Remark
May Allah Bless U
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Then you discovered that it wasn't she !0
After a while; you waked up with yourself falling down ur bed !!0
Will this suit to be a good end ?:smile (71):?0
Alot of thanks,, great work and pls, accept my passing ...0
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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة احســـــاس
Then you discovered that it wasn't she !0
After a while; you waked up with yourself falling down ur bed !!0
Will this suit to be a good end ?:smile (71):?0
Alot of thanks,, great work and pls, accept my passing ...0
Thanks a lot Ihsas for your creativity and gentle passing
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thanks a looooooooot it's really a touching story
you have a wonderful way of writing stories & poems
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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة جوهر
thanks a looooooooot it's really a touching story
you have a wonderful way of writing stories & poems
Thanks a lot for your passing and comment