gotta take u away...baby.....First humble poem

Hi guys...

Today i was sooo bored:smile (83):, because i had been waiting for my next lecture
at the university for almost 3 hours befor i got to class

so, i tried to write my first simple and humble poem


lol:smile (85):

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To U baby

i gotta take u away away


cuz i wanna make u free

,,,,, ,,,,, ,,,,,

look at my broken heart


don't tell me u cannot see

i wanna feel ur love


i wanna steal ur laugh


i wanna be ur half

i wanna make it (we


(i hope u like it (we


WE...baby


(YOU, love and (me

To You baby

Note: I wanna ake it "we"
means..I want to make the "I" becomes "WE"
like: We wanna feel our love...(we instead of I) on the other hand..to be lovers







your opinion pleas



I hope u liked it


...MUStafa

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i wanna feel ur love
i wanna steal ur laugh
i wanna be ur :smile (101)::smile (101)::smile (101):

really beautiful poem
carry on

Thank YOU Jawhar

My pleasure

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very nice and lovely full of passion poem

go a head brother

I loved the poem

Thank you for sharing it with us

welcome to our EC
It is a lovely poem,bro
well done

moon, just me

thaaaaaaaaaaanx so much

that's my pleasure


now I'm really keen to keep up

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thank YOU again

you've written this by yourself ! nice :)

thank for sharing us , i love it

thaaaaaanx Reeeeema

i loved ur comment


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luv it
keep it up


<3

Sweet words bro & sweet luv ^____^
Keep on an' always share us ur poem
May God Bless U

merci meme-girl


my pleasure

:)