Precious Tears

This is a recent poem, composed by me

Read it and tell me your opinions about it

I hope you all like it

Precious Tears

Tears in your eyes
Hard for me to see
Which make me realize
As irresistible as they could be
Alas! Upon your charming face
They left their painful trace
With hope I wanna wash them away
Wishing not to see them after today
O babe! I'm begging you Please
Right here I'm down on my knees
Asking you but is it too much?
They might've needed my touch
She replied with a mournful sigh
Telling me what made her cry
Oh God! Baby I'm deadly sorry
From now and on needless to worry
I promise I will make you mine
To me you will be the sun shine
My eyes shed their tears for a while
When she touched my hands with a smile

By Meant To Be

Wow >>> wow <<< wow

What a talent you have brother


I love reading such light poems

The words were easy going in a harmony

It's an expressive, emotional poem

I really enjoyed reading it

Hey, what are the other hidden talents that you have

I would like to read more of your poems, if it's possible

May Allah bless you, brother

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Ooooooooops

Aseel has just remebered something

Where is the next victim ..... it seems that you answered T. Sultan's questions and ran away

no no no

You have to go back , prepare questions and choose a victim

Wishing you a good time >> lol

Tears in your eyes
Hard for me to see
Which make me realize
As irresistible as they could be
Alas! Upon your charming face
They left their painful trace
With hope I wanna wash them away
Wishing not to see them after today


Oh ... Meant to be !!!!! ... what a precious poem ... believe me you have the talent......keep up the good work ... I liked your words they're so touching and full of emotions ... Good bless you .. and good luck

Aseel,

I really do appreciate what you said, I'm totally flattered,

Your lasting presence means a lot to me :36_4_12:

I don't know how to repay you for that,

Sister, whenever you ask me, be sure that I'll be there. Ain't nothing is impossible,

Here are all my poems

My Destiny

My Friend

My poem for this wonderful site

There are some poems but they're replies to other poems from another club, you will not understand them unless the original once there, so if and only if the writer gave me her permission, I could let you read'em

J.J


I really am so glad to hear your words, I appreciate'em


Thanks a lot for supporting me, it gives me a push forward to write many poems


May Allah bless you sister, Amen

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Hello dear : Meant To Be
actually i was digging and searching for some flaws
as i told you before
looooool

alas

you have a good sense of writing

and so i lost to have a nice debate with you
there is no way
i 've to say :
Thanx


you 've became a teacher no doubt
thanx a lot for such ( Precious Tears ) waiting for more




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Hi brother ,


Wonderful is the poem ...... I really like it .... I wish I were a poet , so I could critique your work ... It's really enough for me to read your words because you know well how to sew the words just like a talented tailor ... God bless you for your great efforts...



Best wishes

My Friend

What beautiful feelings this poem has

I’m so fascinated by this poem

True friendship is seen through the heart,
Definitely Not through the eyes
That’s very true… Your poem reminded me of my best friend who I miss so much

I can feel every word of this poem … I love reading poems about friendship coz it’s something I believe strongly in.

My Poem for this wonderful site

Masha Allah , I’m really impressed

My Destiny –

I read this one before and I remembered when I read it, I couldn’t stop the tears in my eyes. It happened again today.. I’m sorry if I’m reminding you of anything

But here, dear brother, let me tell you something, we do plan for so many things and wish that all our dreams come true >>> Some of them come true and others don’t

But that never means it’s the end of life…. It’s as you said, our destiny and our fate…

Maybe it’s for our own good that some of our dreams don’t come true

One day, I’m sure you will find your soul mate who will just occupy your heart without permission.

Accept my best wishes

Your sister, Aseel

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Something else >>> don't forget your promise
so if and only if the writer gave me her permission, I could let you read'em

Hoefully, that wonderful writer will give you her permission

Alshareef,

Oh, you disappointed me, though I believe that you loved and admired my humble poem,

come on, Am I a teacher?? Don'r remind me of my dream that hasn't come true, though I'm satisfied.

Dear brother, I missed you in that club, but your presence here means so much to me. :neutral: Be always around

Thanks so much for your sweet words and your kindly passing

T.Sultan

Your guess is as good as mine, I really need someone to criticize my humble poems

I really am so glad that you admire it,

Brother, finding you around is like a treasure to me

Thanks a milliong for your permanent passing by

God bless ya, Amen

Aseel,

I extremely am so happy you loved my poems, your words really made my day

Dear sister, you haven't reminded me of anything at all, and I really am so sorry for bringing tears through your eyes agian.

I'm totally speechless about your wise and trusted words, they reflect how kindhearted, complaisant, and lovely you are


Believe me I will never break my promise, so I will send her a private message for taking her permission.

Till then, accept my best wishes and regards

Have a nice day

Such precious tears should never be shed


Beautiful feelings brother


I loved it

Talented


I was happy to read such a words

Well done my friend , i really enjoyed every line

keep on the good work

take care


Yazeed

V. nice
I really enjoyed reading it
Thank you

اقتباس:

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة enigma

Such precious tears should never be shed

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Dear sister, this line has its reflection

I really appreciate your wonderful passing by

Thanks so much

Salsa,

Yazeed,

Um Basma,

I'm happy to see you here

Thank you so much for passing by