wisam,
that was a lovely poem. Pleas continue.
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wisam,
that was a lovely poem. Pleas continue.
Thanks guys for the comments those of you who are having exams I hope that you do well in them. As for love poems I am still working on them but not to forget I need your comments.
thanks for the comments brothers and sisters
Hey there,
This is a poem I wrote about death. I would be greatfull if pass on comments on improving it.
Death how greedy can you be?
You separate from those we love,
You feast upon our...
I want to thank my brothers and sisters for their encouraging comments they passed on the poem I posted a couple of weeks ago. Any I want to just tell you that the poem is not about love of a woman....
"A man may study because his brain is hungry for knowledge, even Bible knowledge. But he prays because his soul is hungry for God." ~ Leonard Ravenhill
�Don�t pray when you feel like it. Have...
Nice story, it shows how clever women are. The we they say " SHE IS A WOMEN".
My name is Mohammed I am 24 years old.I am a teacher and studying a masters degree in English Literature.
I like listening to music especially Celine Deon, Westlife, Blue and Backstreet boys. I...
URS thanks alot for the lyrics. it was one of my best songs by Celine-Dion.
thanks brother
.Thanks Hidy for this advice. And my Allah Grant you eternal happiness
Thanks alot my freinds your comments meant alot to me. My Allah Bless you.
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يا حلاوة
Hey there,
This is a rough draft of a short poem I wrote. Thought it would be helpful if you read it and gave your wise comments.
I thought my heart was fortified.
So it won’t yield for a...
Funny it is yet when you look deep into it you will discover it is depressing. My Allah bless you sis. and grant you Heaven.
Your bother
We once had a Teacher
The Teacher of teachers
He changed the world for the better
And made us better creatures
Oh Allah, we’ve shamed ourselves
We’ve strayed from Al-Mu'allim
Surely here...
The difference between a successful person and others is not a lack of strength, not a lack of knowledge, but rather in a lack of will.
--Vince Lombardi
All men by nature desire knowledge. ...
Thanks brothers and sisters your comments are of much significance to me. I promise you will be reading some of my writing soon.
Brother,
Compelling words that touch the heart. However, forgive to contradict you in that love can open the gate to happeness or to hell. True love is crowned with agony and seperation yet continue...
Dear Brother,
I don't think it is a gift it is a bless to be a mom. As for the second it difficult because a mother means a constructor of a nation. Here are some quotes I went over.
All that I am...
As you sit in silence,
Wondering why
I'll be your shoulder to cry on
Until your tears run dry.
When you've been hurt,
And can't believe what they've done
If you need someone to talk to
I'll...
Looking For The Sun
by Nikki
I hope I never have to suffer
The way you do.
And I don't even know
How much life deserted you.
My misery is just a joke
Compared to what you must feel.
My...
Abu Lama
A very humorous story, it has been a while I haven't read such stories. Thanks alot brother and may Allah helps you in post more lively stories.
The words are very interesting and compelling my sister. I staggered between the easiness and difficulty till I last settle down after a five- time reading. It’s easy to write words and read them yet...