I killed some one

[prettyالسبهه]

I killed someone

Really I did
What can I do I am afraid
It's happened vastly
I always hate him
The bus driver he scares me
He wasn’t waiting me so I have to walk
In sunny, hot days alone no one with me
I hate him he was yelling and drive speedy
Which make me fall on other girls
And I am still suffering although he was lire
Cause every morning the manager of my school
Punish all bus girls as a noisier and we cannot complain
Because if we did he leave us come to school on feet
I hate him but I did not want to kill him
I just want to threat him to stop bother me
But the knife through out his back
And I left him die in his miserable bus
I am cry and cry
Suddenly I wake up it’s him with his stupid bus waiting me
Oh thanks god he is a live
I wrote this and it’s a true when I was in intermediate school
Every thing was happened excepted the killing
I wait ur comments

[abu ghararah]

Waaaaooo what a horrible dream
you made me afraid from you
i am afraid it will be true on day
sleep early , wake up early
i think you were lazy student

[prettyالسبهه]

ha ha ha
abu grarah you should be careful with me
I am not a lazy girl ok. you make me mad
you have to worry
thanks for nice comment

[abu ghararah]

Sorry, I’m so sorry

Sorry for making you mad
Sorry for everything I said
Sorry, I’m so sorry

Sorry if I disappointed you
Sorry if I hurt you
Sorry for everything
Sorry, I’m so sorry

[englishLo0oveR]

hey, what is going on here

I see abu ghararh fallen in sorry with u pretty

anyway, I'm really suprised when I saw your writting

you're getting better and petter in english

keep going and I'm waiting for your next topic

thanks

[prettyالسبهه]

its O.K. abu grarah I will for give you
this time
but actually U make me laugh +

[prettyالسبهه]

English loooover
do you want to know why he fallen in sorry as you said
you will know that soon by a bomb under your car .<<<Terrorist
laugh I am joking >>> silly
thanks so so much I have high mood after ur lines
+

I'm really suprised when I saw your writting

you're getting better and petter in english

keep going and I'm waiting for your next topic

thanks

thanks to you too

[abu ghararah]

haa haa ha
what a good topic
be careful about the bomb under his car
if it's happened

i will be your witness

[قلم الرصاص]

Hello pretty

oh ...this scary dream , what happen pretty...you want kill a bus driver

You are a criminal ..sorry I'm joking

Good writing , thank you so much

[♥√•كـ ♫ ـانت ‏هـنا㋡]

hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

this is the first time I laugh here in English Club

I can'tremember when it was last time

Very nice Topic pretty alsabha


you and abu gararah

Really made me laugh


May Allah bless you

^_^

[ACME]

I wait ur comments

Well , here are my comments on your topic . The idea of the topic is interesting and the title attracts everyone to read the content . I congratulate you and I would like to direct your attention to these minor mistakes . I hope next time you will avoid committing such mistakes .
They are highlighted in a different colour
.

I killed someone

Really I did
What can I do I am afraid
It's happened vastly
I always hate him
The bus driver . he scares me
He wasn’t waiting me so I have to walk
In sunny, hot days alone no one with me
I hate him he was yelling and drive speedy
Which make me fall on other girls
And I am still suffering although he was lire
Cause every morning the manager of my school
Punishes all bus girls as a noisier and we cannot complain
Because if we did he leave us come to school on feet
I hate him but I did not want to kill him
I just want to threat him to stop bothering me
But the knife !!!! through out his back
And I left him die in his miserable bus
I am cry and cry
Suddenly I wake up it’s him with his stupid bus waiting for me
Oh thanks god he is a live
I wrote this and it’s a true when I was in intermediate school
Every thing was happened excepted the killing

.

[rose rani]

your writing is better
now

bus driver
for me my bus driver was
so nice
I made him for long time
I was lazy

thank you dear sister for sharing u

s

[prettyالسبهه]

i will be your witness

abu grarah you are a good person
now you are out my black lest

[prettyالسبهه]

Hello pretty

oh ...this scary dream , what happen pretty...you want kill a bus driver

You are a criminal ..sorry I'm joking

Good writing , thank you so much

قلم رصاص
welcome back I missed your comments

[prettyالسبهه]

The idea of the topic is interesting and the title attracts everyone to read the content . I congratulate you and I would like to direct your attention to these minor mistakes . I hope next time you will avoid committing such mistakes

sirhasan
I felt better after your words
and thanks so much for marking my mistakes
really we need good teacher here like you

[prettyالسبهه]

this is the first time I laugh here in English Club

I can'tremember when it was last time

Very nice Topic pretty alsabha


you and abu gararah

Really made me laugh

hi sense I am glad for passing by
I glad to make you laugh
and I like ur comment it was true

[prettyالسبهه]

bus driver
for me my bus driver was
so nice

Rose Rani
I suggest if you want to go anywhere by his bus
then you can say
Yaaaaaaaaaak I want to die
I am joking with u
thanks for passing by
and you should be careful with me+