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    أتمنى من الاخوان مساعدتي في التحقق من القرامر وبناء الجمل من خلال هذه القطعة ..

    بانتظاركم ..



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    King Fahd University of Petroleum and Minerals has the same problem that occurs in the Kingdom of Saudi Arabia.

    In KFUPM, the number of car crashes are growing every year. In 2007, there were 84 traffic accidents. In 2009, the number of accidents was increased until it reached to 104

    The number of traffic accidents that occur at KFUPM is different from day to day. In 2007, the traffic accidents occured on saturday was 27 and on sunday there were 15 accidents, etc.

    In 2007, more traffic accidents occurred on Saturday. In 2009, more traffic accidents occurred on Sunday




    جمل الكنكلوجين ( الخاتمة ):



    اتمنى التحقق من كل جملة .. لاني سويت كونكلوجين اثنين .. وواحد لي والثاني لاحد الزملاء ..

    Car accidents in the Kingdom of Saudi Arabia and King Fahd University of Petroleum and Minerals, resulting in many deaths and disabilities, and financial losses. However, there are many things that must be taken by the government to reduce the number of car crashes.




    There are many things that occur in Saudi Arabia and King Fahd University because of car accidents. Such as death and disability, and financial losses. In my opinion, the number of traffic accidents in Saudi Arabia and King Fahd University of Petroleum and Minerals will be decrease because of the Saher which is traffic application on Saudi's roads.

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    هلا اخوي


    جميل جداً ماشاء الله عليك


    عدلت حاجات بسيطة مرة و راح تعجب استاذك بإذن الله



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    King Fahd University of Petroleum and Minerals has the same problem that occurs in the Kingdom of Saudi Arabia.

    In KFUPM, the number of car accidents are growing up every year. In 2007, there were 84 traffic accidents. In 2009, the number of accidents increased until it reached to 104

    The number of traffic accidents that occurred at KFUPM is different daily. In 2007, the traffic accidents which occurred on Saturday were 27 and on Sunday they were 15 accidents, etc.

    In 2007, more traffic accidents occurred on Saturday. In 2009, more traffic accidents occurred on Sunday




    جمل الكنكلوجين ( الخاتمة ):







    the results of car accidents in the Kingdom of Saudi Arabia and King Fahd University of Petroleum and Minerals, is the death of many innocents souls , disabilities and financial losses. However, there are many considerations must be taken by the government to reduce the number of car crashes.


    و هذا حق صديقك :)

    There are many victims in Saudi Arabia and King Fahd University because of car accidents. These car accidents are the main reason of many things Such as death , disability and financial losses. In my opinion, the number of traffic accidents in Saudi Arabia and King Fahd University of Petroleum and Minerals will decrease because of the Saher system which is a new traffic system on Saudi's roads.





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