مراجعة مقالة -الحوادث المرورية

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أتمنى مساعدتي في التحقق من القرامر وبناء الجمل .. طبعاً القطعة عبارة عن essay يتكون من (3بودي)
أول بودي: يحكي عن الأخطاء الفردية من السائق التي تسبب الحوادث المرورية
البودي الثاني: يحكي عن الاخطاء الميكانيكية من السياراة التي تسبب في الحوادث المرورية
البودي الثالث: يحكي عن الظروف المناخية التي تتسبب في الحوادث المرورية

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t.s There are many of individual errors that occur from the driver lead to traffic accidents such as speeding

and tiredness

The Speeding cases alot of accidents.The Speeding lead to the disability to control the driver in the car. Another causes of accidents in traffic is a tiredness. The tiredness makes the driver lose foucs while driving





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t.s Mechanical errors in the car lead to traffic accidents such as bad tires brake failure

One of the causes of accidents are bad Tires. The bad tires lead to the deviation of the car and then overturned. There are some traffic accidents occur due to a brake failure!plz complete this sentence






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t.s Environmental conditions caused a lot of car accidents such as rain and wind

The rains cases a lot of accidents. Rains cause the sliding car and thus the driver will lose control of the car. The wind is one of the environmental reasons that lead to accidents. There are some of traffic
accidents occur during the wind because the driver can not see the road wel

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There are many individual mistakes that occurs from the driver himself that lead to traffic accidents such as speed and being tired.
Speed causes a lot of accidents. It make the driver unable to control his car. Another cause of accidents in traffic is being tired. Tiredness makes the driver lose his focus while driving.

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Mechanical errors in the car lead to traffic accidents such as bad tires and brake failure.
One of the causes of accidents are bad Tires. The bad tires lead to the deviation of the car and then overturned. There are some traffic accidents occur due to a brake failure!
(I don't think it is a cause)

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The weather caused a lot of car accidents such as rain and wind
The rains cause a lot of accidents. Rains cause the sliding of cars and thus the driver will lose control of the car. The wind is one of the environmental reasons that lead to accidents. There are some of traffic
accidents occur during the wind because the driver can not see the road very clearly.