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    A030 ~~When it is too late to say sorry ~~




    The scene was taken place in
    A small beautiful home on an old town) )

    Sara was so young to know the meaning of the word death, the feeling of losing some one so special, her eyes were following her mother moves, and she could not understand the way her mother acting today. She looked very sad, tired and her eyes were full of tears Sara was about 7 years old, and she was the only child of Nora and Sami
    Mom, why are you crying, are you sick?. Sara said in a low voice
    Oh no honey I am not sick. Nora said while her eyes were staring at the door
    Oh if I could see you for just one more time, her words were so loud, she could not hold her tears any more
    Sara ran to her mother and holds her so close "moms please don’t cry everything is going to be ok." She tried to wipe her mother's tears with her little fingers but her tears were like a wild river, it refused to stop

    Mom, please, stop, "Sara start to cry, too
    hush, now baby I am really sorry " Nora isTrying "
    To comfort her child now
    What is wrong mom, why are you crying" Sara said with"
    Her crying voice"
    While they were talking Sami entered the room, his eyes were searching for his most precious women in his life
    He could notice the sadness in their eyes, tears were covering their faces
    Sara was the first to notice her father presences
    "Daddy," she ran to him
    "How are you dear, are you ok" Sami leans over, kiss her forehead"
    I am ok. But mommy", she was crying all the day"
    It is ok, honey ; she is not feeling very well today. His eyes were watching his wife sadness; he turned his eyes now to his daughter and said
    "Sara honey could you bring a glass of water to your mother please"
    "Ok, but please, make her stop crying" then she ran to the kitchen
    Sara, are you ok?"
    Sami asked
    "
    She raised her eyes to meet his eyes," No I am not ok
    He was my father Sami, he was there for me all my life but I was not there for him when he was needed me most"
    How can I live with myself, I was so selfish to let him die before telling him how much I loved him
    Oh Sami if I can hold him for one more time" I will never let him die before telling him how sorry I am for not being a good daughter"
    Sami "hush now, I am sure he knew how much you loved him even if you did not say it in words"
    "Oh , dear , sorry seems to be now an easy word to be said but it is too late now is not , oh dad , I will pray for you , please forgive me god " Sara said her last words and start crying

    The End
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    اللهم اجعلنا نتنفس الرضـــا حبا ...حتى يشعر القلب بالأرتياح

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    رد: ~~When it is too late to say sorry ~~

    First of all, I am not going to talk about the moral or the wisdom of this “Story “. Believe me, this is not just a piece of writing or telling a story no, not at all. This is ” a Well -Directed Scene” from Hollywood . I felt that I was watching one of my favorite drama films, but only this time the move gives a real story.
    Sunlight, you really had me there, I have to admit that I teard up little bit while reading the story , because I was in this scene one day.

    God bless you and thank you for sharing with us something real.

    هاهي الشمعة الصغيرة التي طالما اضائت سنينا وسنينا في ذلك البيت
    هاهي تنطفأ .....



    تلك هي النهاية .... وهذا هو الوداع ......

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    رد: ~~When it is too late to say sorry ~~

    very intersting story
    u've written it in a very high dramatical way
    It's my first time to enter English Club
    and I really enjoy reading your short story
    HOPE YOU GOOD DAY

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    رد: ~~When it is too late to say sorry ~~

    lovely story
    amazing writing

    thank you lovely dear for sharing us

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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة alanazi مشاهدة المشاركة
    First of all, I am not going to talk about the moral or the wisdom of this “Story “. Believe me, this is not just a piece of writing or telling a story no, not at all. This is ” a Well -Directed Scene” from Hollywood . I felt that I was watching one of my favorite drama films, but only this time the move gives a real story.
    Sunlight, you really had me there, I have to admit that I teard up little bit while reading the story , because I was in this scene one day.

    God bless you and thank you for sharing with us something real.
    alanazi

    your comments my bro make me sooooooo happy
    I really appreciate your support so thank you
    اللهم اجعلنا نتنفس الرضـــا حبا ...حتى يشعر القلب بالأرتياح

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    رد: ~~When it is too late to say sorry ~~

    WoW!!!!!!!!!!l
    u r really Sunlight!!!!!!! I like it ....u will bcome an amazing writer...
    keep practicing hun..... u will bcome famous... I KNOW IT!!!!!!!l
    LUV YA!
    Keep Smiling
    .
    .

    انتهت لحظاتى الجميلة بينكم...
    كما ينتهى أى شئ جميل فى هذه الحياة...

    اعلموا أن وداعى لكم رغما عنّى
    و لظروف اقوى منّي!!!
    ((( فتذكّرونى دائماً بالخير )))


    و إن كنت اسأت لاأحدكم فليسامحنى
    و إن كنت قصرت مع أحدكم فليعذر تقصيرى
    واحملوا لي فى قلوبكم كل ما هو طيّب


    وأخيراً
    ساأرحل بجسدى وأترك قلبى بينكم
    و لااااأعلم
    هل لنا لقاء آخر أم أن هذا اليوم آخر عهدى بكم

    وداااااااعاً
    مس ثوت

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    رد: ~~When it is too late to say sorry ~~

    dramatical scenes & different emotions happend in short period

    make it a story ....


    Thats Writing



    Thanks ṡύɳ♥lϊɠɦṫ 4 sharing us your creativity


    May Allah Bless U
    لتكن ارواحنا نقية سامية عن كل ما يخدش نقاءنا
    نحترم ذاتنا فنحترم الغير ...
    نتحدث بهدوء وعمق...
    نطلب بأدب...
    نشكر بذوق...
    نعتذر بصدق...
    نترفع عن التفاهات...


    وأن أردنا الرحيل .... نرحل بصمت .


    IF yOu caN dReAm it

    YoU cAn Do iT

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    MASH ALLAH

    I am proud of my self you know why? cause I am a part of this club
    And this club has great writers like you
    Thanks for sharing us … waiting more
    Best Wishes

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    رد: ~~When it is too late to say sorry ~~

    very nice story

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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة glitermoon مشاهدة المشاركة
    very intersting story
    u've written it in a very high dramatical way
    It's my first time to enter English Club
    and I really enjoy reading your short story
    HOPE YOU GOOD DAY
    glitermoon

    thank you for being here and for your lovely comments
    اللهم اجعلنا نتنفس الرضـــا حبا ...حتى يشعر القلب بالأرتياح

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    I like your way of writing this story
    thanks my dear
    you're very creative
    Masha`Allah

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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة rose rani مشاهدة المشاركة
    lovely story
    amazing writing

    thank you lovely dear for sharing us
    rose rani

    you are most welcome my dear sis
    and thank you for your support
    اللهم اجعلنا نتنفس الرضـــا حبا ...حتى يشعر القلب بالأرتياح

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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Miss-Thought مشاهدة المشاركة
    WoW!!!!!!!!!!l
    u r really Sunlight!!!!!!! I like it ....u will bcome an amazing writer...
    keep practicing hun..... u will bcome famous... I KNOW IT!!!!!!!l
    LUV YA!
    Keep Smiling
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    Miss-Thought

    thank you dear for your lovely words they make me so happy
    اللهم اجعلنا نتنفس الرضـــا حبا ...حتى يشعر القلب بالأرتياح

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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Mr.X مشاهدة المشاركة
    dramatical scenes & different emotions happend in short period

    make it a story ....


    Thats Writing



    Thanks ṡύɳ♥lϊɠɦṫ 4 sharing us your creativity


    May Allah Bless U
    Mr.X;

    you are most welcome and thank you for being here

    your lovely comments make me so happy
    اللهم اجعلنا نتنفس الرضـــا حبا ...حتى يشعر القلب بالأرتياح

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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة إجتماعي مشاهدة المشاركة
    MASH ALLAH

    I am proud of my self you know why? cause I am a part of this club
    And this club has great writers like you
    Thanks for sharing us … waiting more
    Best Wishes
    إجتماعي

    words can not thank you enough for your lovely comments
    May Allah bless you and guide you
    ]

    اللهم اجعلنا نتنفس الرضـــا حبا ...حتى يشعر القلب بالأرتياح

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    OoOoh what amazing dramatical scene

    i really lived it an' interacted with it till my tears dropped softly from my eyes

    soOoOo creative
    hope fore more an' best

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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة monalife مشاهدة المشاركة
    very nice story
    monalife
    thank you my dear sis for being here
    اللهم اجعلنا نتنفس الرضـــا حبا ...حتى يشعر القلب بالأرتياح

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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة الواثقة بالله مشاهدة المشاركة
    I like your way of writing this story
    thanks my dear
    you're very creative
    Masha`Allah
    الواثقة بالله

    you are most welcome and thank you my dear sis for your lovely comments
    اللهم اجعلنا نتنفس الرضـــا حبا ...حتى يشعر القلب بالأرتياح

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    I swear by God what i'm going to wirte about your story is not kind of flattering at all. what you've done my sister sth like an expert writer show us one of his writings seriously . The narrating is totally attrcative and language as well. Wallah i wish all the best for you my sister in the future



    please please please don't ignore your talent in writing

    من وجد الله فماذا فقد , ومن فقد الله فماذا وجد

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    Actually perfect and influent
    Really thanks
    May Allah bless and protect you
    Sincerely smack

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    رد: ~~When it is too late to say sorry ~~

    wow

    this was great !!

    I really like it

    Masha Allah

    may Allah bless you ^^

    keep it up

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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة hot-meme=girl مشاهدة المشاركة
    OoOoh what amazing dramatical scene

    i really lived it an' interacted with it till my tears dropped softly from my eyes

    soOoOo creative
    hope fore more an' best
    meme=girl

    I am so glad that you like it. and thank you for your lovely comments
    اللهم اجعلنا نتنفس الرضـــا حبا ...حتى يشعر القلب بالأرتياح

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    May Allah Keeps You Safe
    Our Teacher SunLight
    The Title Really Attracted Me
    And Thank God It Did
    Cause What You've Wrote Here .. Is Truly A Marvel
    Made Me Feel Like .. Am In A Great Drama Play
    So Convincing .. So Touching
    Anxious To Read More Of You Writing Our Dear
    Very Glade To Be Here
    God Be With You All Times





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    Sad Story :(

    May Allah bless our parents
    أعد عروض بوربوينت لأي مرحلة
    للتواصل على الايميل على الهوت ميل monaliza350

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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة فـيصـل مشاهدة المشاركة
    I swear by God what i'm going to wirte about your story is not kind of flattering at all. what you've done my sister sth like an expert writer show us one of his writings seriously . The narrating is totally attrcative and language as well. Wallah i wish all the best for you my sister in the future



    please please please don't ignore your talent in writing


    فـيصـل
    I am so happy to have you here brother coz your comments make me feel that I did someting good so thank you
    اللهم اجعلنا نتنفس الرضـــا حبا ...حتى يشعر القلب بالأرتياح

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