I liked it
though I can't creticise poets
I like ur words and their meanings
Lots of thanx
The Best is waiting 4 U in future ( God Willing ) R
I wrote this poem .......just few lines
I hope that you will like it..........o
Stop for a moment
Take my hands
Look at my eyes
And get back to the past
For childhood days
When we were the best friends
When I was hitting you and cry
And you were hitting me and cry
That was before we know the a b c
What a nice days!!!!!
Why….
Why every thing changed now!!!
Where is our innocence
Our clear feelings
Our smiles!
The smiles that give the life its meaning
Why…What kind of future is waiting for us!
Me and you and all of us …
Think …and answer me
I hope you like it
I liked it
though I can't creticise poets
I like ur words and their meanings
Lots of thanx
The Best is waiting 4 U in future ( God Willing ) R
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thank you my dear ........you too.... the best is waiting for you and all of us (In shaa Allah) 0
Hi sweety
First thanx it is realy nice
second I didn't know that you write poem
all these time and you didn't tell me.. what a good friend ??
oh don't worry I'm just kidding
hhhhhhhhhhhhh....your are really funny
thanke you veeeeeeery much my dearest friend
now .... it is your turn ....show us what do you have
I already wrote two you have to check them yourself and give me your opinion ...honestly ..ok
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