A Social Status - My first short story

[Meant To be]

A Social Status
06 / 06 / 2007

How could a child live her life without one of her parents, especially the father?
Is life going to treat her well, it depends?!

BUT ! what if she grew older with all the accomplished facts around her, not to mention seeing her own friends' parents living all together under one wing. She might be happy for her friends, yet her past keeps chasing her, throbs her heart, and shatters her dreams. Therefore, " What if " is the only question that lasts forever in her mind.

Life goes on, she's still at the same point which she can't keep on doing or even thinking about anything, but the aching past….!

Hard for her to resist
Even though, she insists
To live her life alone
For sure she will mourn
For life that treated her bad
And took the precious she had
With matters she can't change
For things beyond her range
she preferred the death instead
Of being emotionally dead

Every moment of happiness turned into sadness, more precisely, the word happiness doesn't exist in her lexicon of life. However, the sorrow became her past, today, and tomorrow. As for herself, she got used to that…..

Yet there was an enigmatic part
Deep down there in her heart
With light thrown back inside
For her it was the only guide
Into people heart, soul, and mind
For being happy for them, she can't hide
Yeah, she used to help them, she used to care
Whenever they need her, she will be there
She meets them with a smile all over her face
Yet, burnt deep inside of an everlasting case
Alas, she tries to get over it, but it's hard to be
No one will ever be able to set her free
From what she suffers from feeling so poor
Of a real matter that makes you deplore

Endless loneliness her life becomes, the light that she kept running after at the end of her tunnel VANISHED. Her gleam of hope concealed itself within her glittering eyes. She felt that she got blind of the darken room she lives in, that which used to be in one day a bright one.

She tried to commit suicide many times, but each time there was a pulse part deep down in her heart preventing her from acting so. Each time she wonders WHY?!! So, she decided to leave everything behind, after thinking many times of the people whom she used to care about, though, she took her first step ever to a place so far far away.

No one had ever known or heard about her ever since.
Except a written letter they found on her outmoded desk. It reads:

To all my people & friends I've ever known
Sorry to leave you, but my star hasn't been shone
You were all my life, though inside I was alone
Suffering the bitter of a father hadn't shown
Who left me as a helpless child who can't endure
This tough life which is totally obscure
With no one to complain to, or even reveal
The lasting secret that time couldn't heal
So I didn't want you to feel sorry about me
Nor did I like to involve you in my destiny
So I want you to be the best for your children
As you will reap what you sow as one kin
Ain't nothing left to say, but what really matters
That I have completely forgiven my father

Your Faithfully,
The Divorce Victim

By: Meant 2 Be

[Try To Reach]

Hello

a footprints

and i will come again

gonna have a well orgnized story in here

Good from you buddy

[Aseel]

I've enjoyed and sensed every sigle word your pen has written



It's so hard


so hard to be alone in this life with nobody to rely on


with no one to wipe your tears away


with no heart to tell you how much you mean to him


A father is a shelter to his kids


They run away to him whenever they feel unsafe


They hide in his lap when they fear this world


May Allah protect our fathers



Thanks a million for the great piece of writing you shared with us

[enigma]

Meant To Be

I couldn't quote a single word cause I found each letter worth quoting

I was really amazed of your way in describing the psychology of that little woman



While she was suffering deep inside and kept wondering WHY did it happen, she mentained a happy peaceful character with every one around. How sensuous she was

Your story urged my tears to come out, I even felt that the girl resembles someone I know

Thank you great brother

[Meant To be]

Hello

a footprints

and i will come again

gonna have a well orgnized story in here

Good from you buddy

Hey dude,

umm, I don't know why I smell some kinda criticisms between your line

'hehehe, jsut kiddin

and I'll be waiting your coming words for sure

Have a nice day

[Meant To be]

I've enjoyed and sensed every single word your pen has written



It's so hard


so hard to be alone in this life with nobody to rely on


with no one to wipe your tears away


with no heart to tell you how much you mean to him


A father is a shelter to his kids


They run away to him whenever they feel unsafe


They hide in his lap when they fear this world

I do believe that your words give the convenient opposite to my story

and I do want each father to read my story, plus your words

and I did feel every single words you wrote, even I haven't become a father yet

I might've written this story in a time when I've not been at a great mood lately, yet your words revealed some parts of me to get back to my mood, but it's at the mean time


Really I'm so glad that you passed by

and the most important thing, is that you got back again to the club

May God bless ya sister, Amen

[the master]

Meant 2be

thank you a lot

I enjoy evry word in it

[Meant To be]

Meant To Be

I couldn't quote a single word cause I found each letter worth quoting

I was really amazed of your way in describing the psychology of that little woman



While she was suffering deep inside and kept wondering WHY did it happen, she mentained a happy peaceful character with every one around. How sensuous she was

Your story urged my tears to come out, I even felt that the girl resembles someone I know

I always wait your truly words dear sister, coz they encourage me in my times of writings, like they tell me to go on and never stop

What if told you that me myself who wrote it, though I couldn't resist my tears, as I said to Aseel, it wasn't at the right time for me

and what if I told you that it is a true story in most of its parts

I do feel sorry about your tears and for reminding you of that one you know


:and I have to say

Thanks you great sister for every single praise words you said to me

God bless you whenever and wherever you are, Amen

[Meant To be]

Meant 2be

thank you a lot

I enjoy evry word in it

I'm glad you enjoyed that

Thanks brother for passing by

[Try To Reach]

Hey dude,

umm, I don't know why I smell some kinda criticisms between your line

'hehehe, jsut kiddin

and I'll be waiting your coming words for sure

Have a nice day

do you really smell
loooooool



thats not like you dude



anyway


here my second coming



Full of pain

Gloomy is all to say

You drove me insane

Meant To Be , Hey

I can't follow your rain

And it could it be

A case many girls in

Look

This is true

Dana was like it

I guess

So its up to you

To sense my sense



God forgive you my Khalid
A so tragedy start to write
Come on
Yes we like to feel the pain as a victim but not like this
Its so so tragedy
You just remind me with that song called
So much pain in the struggle
And that
Dana
a sixteen years old girl which was living without father
as well or say as badly you dear



That’s it Meant To Be

This story killed every single breath in my chest

but anyway

you were right we don't need an introduction for short stories
as we need it in Novels
but let me draw your attention to this beautiful piece of thoughts
it looks like a telepathy if I can say
more than a short story

[Abo Lama]

Meant To be










some decisions in life could affect other people around us, therefore, one has to think deeply about what are the outcomes that such a decision may bring?


dear brother, your distinguished sense, illustrated a notable writer and a glorious poet as well

keep on at the same track, please :)

[Meant To be]

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Full of pain

Gloomy is all to say

You drove me insane

Meant To Be , Hey

I can't follow your rain

And it could it be

A case many girls in

Look

This is true

Dana was like it

I guess

So its up to you

To sense my sense

How couldn't you follow my rain

when it's just one drop

It's like catching the train

when you're at the STOP

True I know it is

and many are the same

The children are the ones

Who unfairly got blamed

God forgive you my Khalid
A so tragedy start to write
Come on
Yes we like to feel the pain as a victim but not like this
Its so so tragedy

That’s it Meant To Be

This story killed every single breath in my chest

but anyway

but let me draw your attention to this beautiful piece of thoughts
it looks like a telepathy if I can say
more than a short story

As you might know that this story was derived from a true one I know

so it's a bloody tragedy for sure, that why I did all my best to write it this way, coz every time I think of that girl, I feel her pain and it's like she's telling me to write what's accurate, if you got what I mean


and yeah dude you can call it a telepathy

Last but not least

you really did a great job to come up with that title for me, I swear I like it

Thanks for the kind act that's it

Heaven for you brother

[Meant To be]

Meant To be



some decisions in life could affect other people around us, therefore, one has to think deeply about what are the outcomes that such a decision may bring?


dear brother, your distinguished sense, illustrated a notable writer and a glorious poet as well

keep on at the same track, please :)

You got it all in brief brother,

And yeah you're totally right


Finding you here dear brother is a great honor to me, plus your encouragment words made my day

:like they say

Readers are Leaders

I really thank you and I considerably appreciate your presence

Bless ya