Oh, honey !
what you wrote was very great and had warm senses
but as your comment ,, I'll try to guide you to your mistakes in my point of view
when you look to yourself in the mirror, you remember the life and what it did to you from the pain. ( what it learnt you from the pain ) maybe it's better
when you look to yourself in the mirror that it remind you with the life and what it learnt you from the pain
or
when you look to your self in the mirror whenever it remind you with the life and what it learnt you from the pain
when the pain wanted to leave you, it gave you a gift which is not normal .. it's the hurt
when you look to the other side, you feel so happy because you were fighting with much and
much of brave
Keep the good work up ,honey!
May Allah bless you ..
and we are proud of you
with BEST wishes and have a bright future
your sister,
Palestinian Pearl
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