I want to be out of your life and out that door
wonderful words..........with deep meaning
Yaaah
......we miss your words bro
Keep on
Mr.X
,Ladies and gentlemen
here I extend the heart
of love with a poet I
.wrote a month ago
Anyway, I would like
.to share it with you
.Enjoy it
Last Night
I stayed up too late last night till dawn
.because I kept waiting my sunshine to phone
"?Once she was home I asked," What is this all about
.When I looked deep within her eyes, I had a doubt
.If you have something to say, just spit it
.If you did something wrong, just admit it
."Listen! I will be so honest and so clear", she said
?I said," I knew it. What happened and what you did
.She said," Look! I feel I am not all yours anymore
".I want to be out of your life and out that door
!"How dare you feeling that and saying "I am not all yours
.If you are not so, my life is definitely going to be in blues
You know what? I need to be with you every where
.because, frankly, you really look after me with care
.I precisely want to share love only with you all the time
.If you do not do me likewise, you indeed like to two-time
,Whenever you want to hurt someone's feelings and flee
.please, just give him his heart back and set it free
,If you keep insisting on making up such unfair mind
.that means you got your life and I lonely got mine
,One last thing I ask, I would like you to dig my own grave
.dress in black and cry over me with a sorrow goodbye wave
,With regards
Instigator
I want to be out of your life and out that door
wonderful words..........with deep meaning
Yaaah
......we miss your words bro
Keep on
Mr.X
لتكن ارواحنا نقية سامية عن كل ما يخدش نقاءنا
نحترم ذاتنا فنحترم الغير ...
نتحدث بهدوء وعمق...
نطلب بأدب...
نشكر بذوق...
نعتذر بصدق...
نترفع عن التفاهات...
وأن أردنا الرحيل .... نرحل بصمت .
IF yOu caN dReAm it
YoU cAn Do iT
wow
nice words you write it my brother
Thanx Instigator
splendid masterpiece, I haven't enjoyed reading it though
I will be back with a suitable comment
Till then, have a pleasant day
Peace
I really enjoyed reading ur topic
it's wonderful...so keep it up
With all my best
One last thing I ask, I would like you to dig my own grave
.dress in black and cry over me with a sorrow goodbye wave
I really don't find the words that would describe how marvellous
your poem is
It's one of the most touching, amazing poems I've ever read
It's covered with sorrow and pain
It's so sad and painful to find out that those who meant so much to you,
you meant actually nothing to them
:(
Waiting to read more poems written by you
Actually, our two poets, Meant to be and Try to Reach, have deprived us from their poems
It has been a long time since their last poems :(
:36_4_12:I am realy intersted in poems although sometimes I don't understand it
Thanks very much
I wish to you the success
I liked this poem because it's full of meaning and emotions
also, you have a good choice of phrases and words
you're talented
but does this poem speak about a real situation? if it does.. how could you make your life dependant on someone's feeling? I'm sure your life is more significant that to be bounded with someon's emotions
tha's my opinion..
good luck and keep on the good work
:36_4_12:thanks for eny think :36_16_16:
Instigator
I never enjoyed the pain but i follow your red words
astonished
each time i stopped by one of them
Good sense of writing no doubt
thanx for giving me the right to come here and see your creative writing
go ahead dear
bs : Aseel go away
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الحساب الأول وهو خاص بمادة اللغة الانجليزية
http://www.4shared.com/dir/9540021/6...7/sharing.html
الحساب الثاني وهو ايضاً مكمل للغة الانجليزية مع بعض الخلفيات
والملفات العربية الطيبة وبرنامج نور على الدرب لأبن باز رحمه الله
http://www.4shared.com/dir/20133589/...0/sharing.html
والحساب الثالث والاخير هو حساب اسلامي عام
http://www.4shared.com/dir/8109169/b...e/sharing.html
يوتيوب
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Whenever you want to hurt someone's feelings and flee
.please, just give him his heart back and set it free
Stating such a hard order , Suggestion if I might say , in a situation full of passions is really brave
!!
Instigator.....Long time no see ...you've been really missed in the club
keep your poetic butterflies hovering around mate..Would you
?
Yours
Mona Dickens
Where flowers bloom .. So does Hope
Instigator
Man
We haven't read from you in ages
Really glad that you came back and chose these beautiful lines to share with us
عفوا ......!!
حتى صمت العالم تبدد .......!!
إلا صمتي في كل حين يتجدد .......!!
splendid masterpiece, I haven't enjoyed reading it though
I will be back with a suitable comment.Don't keep me waiting,please
Till then, have a pleasant day
Peace.Same to you, dear
Peace
I really don't find the words that would describe how marvellous
your poem is
It's one of the most touching, amazing poems I've ever read
It's covered with sorrow and pain.I don't know what to say
I am speechless and running out of
the best and beautiful words to say
.thanks a lot, dear sister
It's so sad and painful to find out that those who meant so much to you,
you meant actually nothing to them
:(That's really right because I have
.tried them and their reactions
,The moment I remember them
what they did to me twists my heart
!to cry. So, I ask WHY
Waiting to read more poems written by youPlease, don't be so because I
rarely write poems unless you
.have time to wait more
Actually, our two poets, Meant to be and Try to Reach, have deprived us from their poems
It has been a long time since their last poems :(
May Allah help them to be around
.with us to keep writing up
:36_4_12:thanks for eny think :36_16_16:
.I am happy you like it
THANKS
Instigator
I never enjoyed the pain but i follow your red words
astonished
each time i stopped by one of them
Good sense of writing no doubt
thanx for giving me the right to come here and see your creative writing
go ahead dear
bs : Aseel go awayI am really happy you enjoyed
.and liked my words, dear
.bs: help me to kick Aseel away
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BAD BOY, hah
Stating such a hard order , Suggestion if I might say , in a situation full of passions is really brave
!!.Yeah, I have nothing to lose
.Truth hurts
Instigator.....Long time no see ...you've been really missed in the club
keep your poetic butterflies hovering around mate..Would you
?
Yours
Mona Dickens.I know that but I missed you, too
.I would do so if I could
.Thanks a lot for encouraging me
.Keep it up
Yours
Yasser
Instigator
Man.Yup, Enigma
We haven't read from you in ages.You make me feel older with white hair
.Come on!!!! I am still young
Really glad that you came back and chose these beautiful lines to share with us
I am happy to be in my second
.home sharing my words with you, too
التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة Instigator ; 15-12-2007 الساعة 03:14 PM
thanks sister
soo greaet word
go on
bs : Aseel go away
bs: help me to kick Aseel away
out, both of you
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