::HI 4 EVRYONE::
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ASLAMOU 3LAYKOM WA R7MAT
Allah WA BRAKATO
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my teacher asked me 2 write a.c about my personal hero
* by using this plan :
Introdction: person u r writing about.
paragraph:description.
paragraph2 :one Quality u want 2 Emphasize.
paragraph3 :Astory that shows ,this quality.
conclusion : How the person has influenced u.
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I want from u looking at this a.c and tell me if it's right or not.
"MY MOM"
My mom is my hero. I know she always loves me no matter what and she is my best friend. My mom takes the time to help with my homework. She helps me to understand when I don't understand something. My mom and I read a lot of books together. My mom was there for me when I had my open-heart surgeries. She stayed at the hospital with me. She didn't sleep many nights just to make sure that I was ok. My mom always tries to keep me healthy. She always gives me vitamins and healthy food to eat. My mom cooks at home. In my opinion her cooking is the best. Her food is DELICIOUS. Often my mom asks me for help with cooking and baking. When I am sad my mom comforts me and we talk. Sometimes we have a
cup of tea or a cup of hot coco. My mom makes me laugh and then everything is better again. When we go shopping together we have lots of fun. Sometimes my mom lets me pick what I want. My mom is the besT.
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اعذروني على الاطاله ,,
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