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[future..dream]

this is a poem about my Dr I want your opinions about it and if you have any notes please tell me.......
Four Years with Dr.Kamal
Your character is rare
You are really fair
If a poem seems to be complex
You never become stressed
You try and try to make it simple
By giving us a reasonable example

When sun rises on Saturday
Wonderful moments begin to ray
These are the moments of translation
To get more explanation
Whether it is scientific or literary
You help us translate it simply

When we want to translate
Or want to learn how to translate
You never seem to apologize
But also try to recognize
The way we use in translation
With your patience and appreciation

Come my friends to the lecture of essay
And listen to what I will say
Dr.Kamal teaches us in a good way
What we can learn from essay
Good research paper we hope to write
For we want you to direct the light

Really we have to praise
With a word or with a phrase
Dr.Kamal must be praised
And in a bright place he must be placed
Either he is careful or helpful
For him we must be grateful.
Futuredream,A

[the master]

nice poem

Futuredream

thank you

[مــلك الحرف]

When sun rises on Saturday
Wonderful moments begin to ray
These are the moments of translation
To get more explanation
Whether it is scientific or literary
You help us translate it simply

future..dream




I liked what you wrote sis

Hope to see other nice topics posted by you here

thanx for sharing