~*~Answered Prayers~*~

[الغاليه]

this is a poem I wrote....hope u like it

At midnight, I watch the shade …
Waiting for the dark to fade..

And suddenly, you are here..
My prayers were answered..

Flame, is that the word??
Or is it something like the fog!!

But I know that you are here..
My prayers were answered..

All this madness in my heart..
Flickering light in my eyes..

Tell the world am in love..
Surely with the right one..

life without you seems a loss..
Having no one I can trust

Then like rain, you came down..
Promising paradise in your arm..

Kept me sheltered from the snow..
Warmed my heart with passions' glow ..

Like a candle, lit up my days..
Surrounding me with tender grace..

I touch the stars when I'm with you..
For you are a dream came true..

Gently walking on the beach..
Lovely shells at our reach..

I drew a map of happiness…
Said goodbye to loneliness..

You taught me how to float so high..
Leaving all my sadness behind..

don't you leave, not now or ever..
Your absence tastes so bitter..

Unbearable, like a bleeding wound..
That is how I long for you…

Cruel is life, full of tears..
I'm so lost when you're not here..

[Instigator]

.It is a very lovely and wonderful poem

,Dear Alghalyah
.thanks a lot for sharing it with us
.Keep it up

[password26]

Thanks a lot its a really nice poem ..... it touched my heart ...... amazing how some people can express their feelings in such a beautiful way.... I hope I marry a man who can write poetry lol

[الغاليه]

Instigator

am always happy to see you

thanx soooo much dear brother

password26

I wish your dream comes true ,sooon :D

thanx for passing & for your kind comment

[password26]

don't mention it darling ...... truly you deserve more .......


<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< still dreaming of marrying a poet :D

[الغاليه]

keeeeeep dreaming :D...


I wish u all the best darling

[SuPeRLaRk]

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[Tell the world am in love..
Surely with the right one..

life without you seems a loss..
Having no one I can trust

really you are very creative one and your brain is "expensive"like your nick
name

my ALLAh bless you
We wait more from you

[JuSt Me]

Dear Alghaliah, I can not express or comment, higher than this. Thanks

Cruel is life, full of tears..
I'm so lost when you're not here

[الغاليه]

really you are very creative one and your brain is "expensive"like your nickname

woooooow

big words for me bro :D

thanx for your kind compliment

[الغاليه]

Dear Alghaliah, I can not express or comment, higher than this. Thanks

it seems like that I can't thank you enough :o

am so honoured by your words

God bless you brother>>>again...am sure :D

[اسيــ حبه ــرة]

Hi my dear sister Alghalyah

What an amazing things you bring

This one is sooooo lovely

Really ... we have talented people here

I wish you all the best

Go ahead and show us your abilities

[الغاليه]

hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii dear sis

talented??????????...I think it's big word 4 me :D

am glad u liked it

thanx...and wish u all the best

[DR AHLAIN]

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Like a candle, lit up my days..
Surrounding me with tender grace..

I touch the stars when I'm with you..
For you are a dream came true..[/quote

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wonderful poem

BRAVO>>> (FRENCH)Im NOT QUITE SURE OF IT'S SPELLING

Alghaliah
We are so proud that we have a star such as You

Thank you very much for responding to us when we asked to write more poets


You deserve cheer

AND
congratulation FOR YOUR NOW PAINT
(GREEN) :D

[الغاليه]

thanx soooooooooo much dear brother

I hope I don't disappoint u

[nader1]

dear valuable girl
congratulations for the wonderful poem u have written. it's a very elegant peice of work and i liked much.
am not a poet to comment or critisize on ur poem but i will tell u what i think, no hard feelings
1- a very touching poem with great and warm passion.
2- not really sure about wheather it is rymed or not.
3- check the tone and try to put it in a clear stanza
this would make it gain more credit, though italready has.
if i were meant by such a poem, i might lose consciousness.
well done wealthy poet and keep up the good work.
sorry about what i have written.thanks for ur valuable participation

[الغاليه]

dear brother nader1

it's nice of u to read my humble words

am not a poet and will never be

I only write what I feel

very glad that u liked it


I'll put more effort into my next poem

thanx sooooo much

[الهمة العالية]

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you are woooooooooooooooooooonderful
the way you write
soooooo great
Go ahead my darling
am waiting for you[/COLOR]

:rolleyes: :rolleyes: :rolleyes:

[الغاليه]

I can't believe my eyse:eek:


finally....I see my dearest friend here...reading my humble poem:o


u r the greatest my dear

thank u soooooooo much 4 ur sweet lovley words


May Allah bless u

[English Lover]

Oh.....what day is this ....

we discover a poetess here ....


not only poetess


she's a great one

thanx to

your feelings

which is wonderful


I have a good voice

Can I sing this poem if I get a chance in the media?......hhhhh

llloooooooooooooooooooollll

[الغاليه]

Oh.....what day is this ....
we discover a poetess here ....

llloooooooooooooooooooollll

woooooooooooow

poetess??? not a chance:D


thank u dear bro English Lover 4 ur lovely, sweet words

they mean sooooo much 2 me

I have a good voice
Can I sing this poem if I get a chance in the media?......hhhhh
llloooooooooooooooooooollll

of course u can>>>knowing that such a chance would never come:D


just kidding