Super Sweeper

**M.o_o.N** · 12-07-2009, 07:28 PM

Super Sweeper

"Good morning madam" said the salesman, rising his hat. "I am from the –Nusweep cleaner company-. I am sure you will be interested in this new carpet sweeper. It is the very latest model. May I come in & show you how it works? You are, of course, under no obligation to buy it"

The lady seemed interested in that machine , so she agreed in that saying: "Yes ,sure. Come on in please". The salesman entered, he was watching around " this is a very beautiful house madam" he said. " Oh thank you, have a seat sir" she replied pointing to the fancy sofa.

" I am Mrs. Bright, what's your name" she asked .

" I am Martin, It's my first day in this company. I hope I can find a lot of nice costumers like you. Would you mind if I show you how this sweeper work?"

"No, go ahead please" she answered.

The salesman turned on the machine & started by showing her how to turn it on and how to use it and in what kind of carpets. It worked and Mrs. Bright liked it. Salesman was about to turn it off but he made a big mistake. He pressed the *high* switch and at the same time he pulled the iron cable which cause some trouble inside the machine. The sweeper was going crazy making a lot of noisy sounds .

" What's going on??!!" Mrs. Bright asked in suspicion tone.

" That's ok, don't worry, the sweeper do that sometimes to increase its activity" he replied quickly. "

Suddenly, the machine start to push the dirt from inside instead of taking it up. The place became full of dirt and dust, both the woman & salesman kept coughing, Mrs. Bright hurried to the door and opened it to let the air come into the room. Looking at the living room, it was miserable as if it was war battle.

"Ugh my Lord am sooooo sorry madam, It wasn't my fault ..please….You must know that, believe me ,I don't know what happened and made her crazy like that….Ehhh" the salesman said.

"All what I know young man" said Mrs. Bright angrily as she handed the salesman a broom." Is that you are not leaving this house till you have cleaned my carpet & dusted my furniture!".

**postgraduate** · 12-07-2009, 09:03 PM

Renoa
Great ! You surprised me . Your language is very good .Keep it up

**rose rani** · 13-07-2009, 12:11 AM

So excellent writer you are, that surprise me whenever
you write

thank you hony for fascinating us all the time

**نبع الغرام** · 13-07-2009, 05:12 AM

**M.o_o.N** · 26-07-2009, 10:40 PM

wow

thanks friends

Wallah you just gave me a push to keep writing

Allah may bless you

^___^

**sanurita** · 23-12-2009, 05:52 PM

Renoa

you R sooo amazing
honestly, u r agreat writer
keep going honey

**The tolerant** · 23-12-2009, 07:53 PM

hi my sweet little sis
nice work my dear keep on

**الشامخ 9** · 23-12-2009, 08:23 PM

**Nanosh** · 23-12-2009, 09:00 PM

Go ahead
ur creative person , wish you happy life

**جاكوار2** · 23-12-2009, 09:04 PM

**Petunia** · 23-12-2009, 09:51 PM

Renoa

looooooooooooooooool he was a foolish saleman .

if i were his boss i would fire him Immediately

really funny story dear and i have enjoyed reading it

may Allah bless you honey

**مهـرة الـروح** · 23-12-2009, 10:06 PM

renoa

dd u write it honey!!

if u wrer its so amazing really u r creative

i'm proud of u

and if u were not

i hav enjoyed reading it

funny end

loool

thaaaanx honey keep on

**:lost lady:** · 23-12-2009, 11:20 PM

Mash' Allah
Renoa
U r awesome LOoOL
May Allah bless U dear Sis
keep it up

**BloumagrieT** · 24-12-2009, 12:53 AM

Renoa

Well done dearest

That lady made a good decision

hahaha

Keep the good work

**M.o_o.N** · 24-12-2009, 05:00 PM

sanurita

thank you sweety
glad to see you in my topic ^ ^

you are welcome

ام يزيد90

my dear dear dear sister
thank you for being here :)

mwah

الشامخ 9

welcome brother

Nanosh

thank you my dear for passing by my story :)

جاكوار2

welcome sweety

pink-pen

and I really truely enjoyed seeing you here
glad you loved it
thanks alot huny pie

**M.o_o.N** · 24-12-2009, 05:10 PM

مهرة بلاجواد

Yeah sweety I wrote it myself ^ ^
glad you enjoyed it my dear
welcome
mwah

:lost lady:

May Allah protect you our sweet Supervisor

SoOoSoOo

sweet laugh as your sweet soul :)
thank you for being here my teacher