Lets Write A story All of Us

[M.o_o.N]

hey Soso ^.^
Welcome back sister
We all missed u

[Deana]

hi I did not get the meaning of quests would u please explan it i want to share in this story
Have a nice dan..

[Deana]

sorry i think the story has endeed but i am waiting for new story

[M.o_o.N]

Hey sweety :)
It meant guest i believe. .
And Yalla u go ahead and start a story that we will share writing it. .
Thanks Deana

[Deana]

handsome young man was sitting on the banks of the beach,thinking about his life and how can he get money to pay the rent,while he thinking he......

[aussie]

how much drops in this sea
wondering, thinking, it's not fair
sea doesn't whine, it should be
it gives more, no one care
get our rubbish, that's our fee :)
dreaming long, i can share
working hard, no one dare

[M.o_o.N]

so he thought , the beach is full of dangerous stuff like sharp stones, broken glass every where and plastic unuseful trash. . .someone gotta clean it . .

He went to the nearest supermarket and brought gloves and boxes to throw the dirt inside it. .

He returnd to the beach and started cleaning it by himself.

"I am in a vacation and Cleaning my enviroment is my responsibility as a citizn" He said.

The other people felt shame that they aren't sharing him . .so they gatherd together to help him and gave him a hand in cleaning the beach.

Sorry for the spelling mistakes
I am in hurry

[Deana]

while he was gathering the rubbish with other people he remembers that he forgot to meet his close friend who will travel after one hour and his friend will travel to canada to complete his education and he will not come back before four years

[M.o_o.N]

One of the men in the beach was Taxi driver and he heard the call , He asked him if he need a ride and the man said yes.

As quick as possible the driver went directly to the airport in half an hour.

The man thanked him and when he reached the passengers hall he found his best friend was about to leave.

They met , hugd each other and wishd for the best. .


End of the story :D
Thanx Deana

[Deana]

you are welcome
I hope that everyone enjoy with this short story....

[M.o_o.N]

I hope so ^.^

So shall we start a new story?

["Neverland"]

"

SURE SISTER

"
there was a young man who lives in a big house
likes to study, travel, swim, do many activeties, and around himself with friends
who is really a good example of an optimistic man
once, he was driving his car, made an accedent
and suddenly he was in comma for 3 years
when he woke up he found no body
wondered why am I here...?!! then he tried to stand
but what happend is he lost his legs
at a moment all of his dreams broken

"

keifee1212
Thank you too :)

[M.o_o.N]

awww Neverland why you said he lost his legs? U just made me sad lol

Okay . . .let it be a romantic story since he is unable to walk :)


when he found out , he felt sad and very depressed . .he couldnt stand for the idea that he wont walk never again.

One day he was thinking and a tear fall suddenly, the nurse noticed that and she felt sad for him.
She knew that he was a good medical student so the next day she brought a book with her , knocked his room and left the book near him while he was sleeping.

["Neverland"]

renoa
for change :)

"

he saw her, but he acts as if is sleeping
after she left he looked at the book
remembered something
there was an emergency conditional
and he was on his way, driving fastly

[M.o_o.N]

it was rainy day , almost 6:00 P.M
He was driving to reach the hospital
But suddenly ,thunder stroked a tree which fall in the middle of the street ,he tried to avoid it but that lead him directly to the forst.
He couldn't move ,and he was stuck in the car.

A truck driver saw all that and went to help him. .thats all what he remembered.

["Neverland"]

he remembered how much he was love the medical
took the book,, and tried to browse it
,, he kept reading
asked the nurse to bring more and more books
and time by time he being more professional
once, he was moving by his wheelchair
heard someone who scream
No.. No .. It's impossible
at a while he stopped,, then he decided
to nack the door
and that's what really hapened
he nacked the door and asked to help
when he intered the room, the patieont's doctor asked him
why are you here..? you want something or what?.. the doctor said
he ignored the doctor and looked at the patient
told him, I heard your screams
tell my why..? may be I can help

[M.o_o.N]

the sick woman told him that she was expecting a baby and now the doctor is telling her that she is having a cancer and that is too hard to bear so she have to choose between her pregnancy or her health .
Our man is very talent and already faced such a situation, he told her that she can keep the baby and do the chemo method of therapy after her giving birth. .that might gave her only few months with her child.
The doctor was very shocked how this man know such information!
The nurse at that time was watching and she was very proud of her friend and how honest and smart doctor he is.

[aussie]

يعطيكم العافية على القصص والحيوية اللي في هذا الموضوع

ماشاء الله خيال واسع وقصص حلوة

بس فيه طلب اذا امكن

قبل ماتحطو تكمله القصص ياليت تتأكدو من الأخطاء الإملائية ( اعتقد في كل مشاركة خطأ واضح )

ما اقصد شي وانما من المحزن موضوع مثل هذا يكون مليئ بالأخطاء

وتقبلو التحية

[M.o_o.N]

Aussie

You are right
Since you bring that up why don't You start fixing the mistakes? :) and then one by one we will share you Inshaa Allah

["Neverland"]

aussie
I am very glad to know someone like you, who's able to find out our mistakes and fix them

so, we're waiting

[aussie]

امممممممم والله اني مستحي ولكن هذا طلبكم واتمنى ما احد يزعل

سأكتفي بتصحيح أول مشاركة وآخر مشاركة

بسم الله نبدأ

hey friends :d

well , i didn't see a similar topic so i'm going to be the first

it's a game were we can practice our english

each member complete the story of the other member ,short and nice . Then after ten or so replies we finish one story & start another one. .



good?




Yala i will start :d


a beautiful girl was walking in the street going home after school , she was hungry and thought. .let me pass by the supermarket and get strawberry cake. ..

the sick woman told him that she was expecting a baby and now the doctor is telling her that she is hasing a cancer and that is too hard to bear so she has to choose between her pregnancy or her health .
Our man is very talent and already faced such a situation, he told her that she can keep the baby and do the chemo method of therapy after giving her birth. .that might gave her only few months with her child.
The doctor was very shocked how this man know such information!
The nurse at that time was watching and she was very proud of her friend and how honest and smart doctor he was.

مع العلم اني طالب وخبرتكم احسن مني بكثير بس كذا جاني احساس انها خطأ

أطيب المنى

[M.o_o.N]

Ewww thats unfair they are only my comments loool

Thanks anyway but yalla waiting for the fixing thing ^.^

["Neverland"]

The End

"
The man learned that
however what we are in, by hard work we can create the miracles

who's the next

[aussie]

وهذا تعديل عشان Neverland

he remembered how much he was loving the medical
took the book,, and tried to browse it
,, he kept reading
asked the nurse to bring more and more books
and time by time he being more professional
once, he was moving by his wheelchair
heard someone who screamed
or
who was screaming
No.. No .. It's impossible
at a while he stopped,, then he decided
to Knock the door
and that's what really happened
he Knocked the door and asked to help
when he entered the room, the patient's doctor asked him
why are you here..? you want something or what?.. the doctor said
he ignored the doctor and looked at the patient
told him, I heard your screams
tell my why..? may be I can help[/COLOR]

اول عدلت على I heard your screams لأني ماشفت الآر في يو واعتذر فالجملة صحيحة

مرة أخرى مستواكم أحسن مني ولكن اوقات تجيني احاسيس غريبة حول الكلمات الانجليزية

ويعجبني اتلاعب بها :)

[M.o_o.N]

Thank you both

Neverland
Aussie

for making this topic fun and refreshing it ^_^