I am not no more me

[habeeb]

I am not no more me
I look , but I used to see
I hear, but now the two looks and sound three
I talk but no fruits on this tree
I fight but my fight is now for others to see
I help but my help is rarely free
I teach but now a must is the fee
I am no more me
living while dying
selling and buying
telling the truth yet lying
sadly most will die trying

I am no more me
there used to be a kid in me

[MisS shy]

thanks a lot brother"habeeb" 4 sharing us

[cute dream]

wooow ,, amazing job

i loved the last line most

it shows the way u er inspired ,, it shows alot about u

nice writing ...

keep doing so ,,,

[M.o_o.N]

Masha Allah if this poem is by you
Then I should tell you how much I admire your style and the way you put the words.

Next time I wanna read shiny and happy poem :)

Thanx alot

[book-n-coffee]

I am not no more me
I look , but I used to see
I hear, but now the two looks and sound three
I talk but no fruits on this tree
I fight but my fight is now for others to see
I help but my help is rarely free
I teach but now a must is the fee
I am no more me
living while dying
selling and buying
telling the truth yet lying
sadly most will die trying

I am no more me
there used to be a kid in me

lost in this world-- what a great thought brother Habeeb

If I may, I'd like to find out who wrote these lines?? was it you-- well anyways I wanted to say I really enjoyed reading your lines

thanks again

:)